DXD: Queen of Angels

yuuur this is my first time writing outside of school and I am probably going to use Grammarly to check my spelling cause I suck at that. I made this cause no one tries making a story about angels or God. well That is it from me see ya people

YOU ARE ALL STUPID..THIS NOVEL HAS AN AWESOME MULTIVERSE POTENTIAL STORY AND HAREM..THE MC CAN VISIT OTHER ANIME WORLD AND GET THE GIRLS -mushoku tenseI GHISLAINE hot mom ,naruto TSUNADE-KAGUYA bleach ANOHANA-YORUICHI SHIHOIN-fairy tail-IRENE BELSERION need to be save-one piece BIG MOM-YAMATO-BOA HANCOCK fate TIAMAT-mass effect LIARA TSONI-buffy vampire slayer BUFFY SUMMERS-azur line WARSHIP GIRLS-outlaw star SAZUKA

Hmm this story maybe one of the most potential dxd fanfic about heaven, i rarely see dxd fanfic about heaven, i hope this story don't dropped and Will be continue to the end, i have a suggest about this fanfic can you writing more about reference politics demon, the fallen and another pantheon on this fanfic?

put the genderbender tag next time, either in the description, in the reviews or aa a warning in the beginning of the first chapter

First, where’s all the other real reviews? Second, the grammar. It’s atrocious, not as bad as translations, but it’s really bad. There's missing dialogue, wrong pronouns, bad syntax, and the names of certain characters keep changing. The only reasons this story isn’t a 1⭐️ is because it’s not made with Ai, and it’s a really interesting concept. Author, please pay attention to what you write, most of your errors coulde be avoided with a simple re-read. And there’s tons of free correctors available on the internet, use them. Overall, it’s a really good idea ruined by bad grammar and inconsistency. If you read this, author, don’t give up. And, most importantly, bad grammar is 100 times better than Ai. Finally, DO NOT USE AI.

Awesome start I am really stoked to see how this will continue.

A very good fanfic, I recommend it. I hope you start the smut chapters as soon as possible as there is a smut and ecchi tag. You could make her pair up with genderbend Issei or with Gabriel if you want to write some kinky stuff

The story is very good, I look forward to more every day 👏👏👏👏👏👏➕➕➕➕➕➕➕➕➕➕➕➕➕➕➕➕➕➕➕➕➕➕➕➕➕➕➕➕➕➕➕➕➕➕➕➕➕➕➕➕➕➕➕🙏🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉💤💤💤💤

This fanfic has a really great start to it. This is also one of the few good DXD fanfics out there. and i really hope the author will countinue uploading this masterpiece

I approve you should make the super angel start hunting down sacred gear user who aren’t humans anymore

Awesome chapters and an amazing story so far.

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haven't read yet but tje fact that I wrongly read your title as 'Queen of Spades' made me write this review XD. I'll try read it later tho, keep the good work

One of the very few high school dxd FanFiction that I genuinely like I hope author will keep updating this Masterpiece