Honkai: Fire Moth Herrschers

Finally a honkai fic where no harems are involved.

Great translation and better storyline than most other hi3 fics, no crazy overpowered MC yet at least and the relationships are good. No Harem.

Currently my favorite HI3 fanfic. Even though I myself doesn't follow nor play MiHoYo games, I really like this story. One of my favorite settings in novels are dark, but not over the top. This fanfic ticks that box perfectly, MC is as the synopsis say, is not really mentally stable and the narration shows it exceptionally. But, not all of it is depressing, this fanfic have great character interactions between side characters. They have their own side chapters? Where their characters are built (character building). And my most liked part, a very cute romance between the MC and Elysia, they act like each others anchor in the grim fated to end world of Honkai Impact. A really great fanfic that has made me very interested with the story of MiHoYo games world, before this I thought that they are just some run of the mill Gacha Games, but now I may have a different opinion once I played them. Very good fanfic, I recommend.

I really like the pacing :) story is nice and the relationship between the mc and elysia is js so cuteee

Reveal Spoiler

A very good honkai fic which is not harem and which is well written, I just hope that it continues to be updated, since it hasn't been updated for a month.

The story is good, extra points for not being Harem (which is practically a miracle nowadays). Writing is awful, it's too dry, with few descriptions and too fragmented (aka no elements to connect the sequence of events). Dialogs are artificial and don't properly convey emotions, sometimes even feeling robotic. Mc is OK as well, I wouldn't call him remarkable, but he is tolerable. Update stability is average World background is acceptable

I can't believe a fanfic this good isn't very known. I have re-read this fic and I want to give this one a second review. "Man I just re-read this fic and holy shit this is absolute cinema. The foreshadowing goes crazy. The drama and twist and turns of Michael is heart wrenching.. I can't believe I could get much more invested in characters in a fanfic rather than the OG materials. Also the Previous Era of HI3 is extremely depressing. Let's start, MC is from the same orphanage where Elysia is from, and due to certain circumstances, he receives the qualification to be a witness of the tragic fate of the Previous Era in HI3, where fate is destined, fatalism is absolute and determinism is supreme. Also his goal is to change the fate of his beloved Elysia.. (this is depressing). Time for my review. The characters here are so life-like, their interactions are cute and wholesome albeit bittersweet knowing it's fate. Made me seem as if I was truly observing a tragic world from an era bygone. You NEED to read this one as if it's an actual book, slowly and capture the meaning of some important sentences to truly understand the depth and philosophy that each characters have. Then once you do that, you will truly capture foreshadowing of the future potrayed within it. Truly a masterpiece of a fan fiction, got me feeling like I'm reading LOTM again. Also just to assure you, this is a NON-HAREM so if there is an incident that whilst reading that may cause you to think otherwise, don't worry. Absolutel Masterpiece, it's only drawback is the somewhat inconsistent names for a few side characters, but that's it. What an absolute month I have had reading this one. " - From a review in my reading list.

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fix the first chapters i think its jumbled