Landlord World - Start with SSS talent

Stupid author here :D Writing a review for my own book is not easy, so I'll just say a few things. - "Who is the MC?" Noan, he is a normal person. I would like to emphasize once again, Noan is just a normal person, he also knows the fear of death, he is also greedy and has desires for beautiful girls. Of course, I did not build a male lead who is a Simp. Is Noan smart? Yes! Is Noan stupid? Of course, yes! Noan has the desire to become stronger, not only to take revenge but also to survive in that brutal world. - "What is Noan's SSS rank talent?" It was the talent 'Almighty Fusion', which could help Noan fuse three monsters or heroes of the same rank and type to create a stronger individual. - "Will he be overpowered with SSS talent?" Not really. Although Noan possesses an SSS rank talent, he is only an F rank lord. With the number of monsters he can summon and the amount of materials needed to fuse, those conditions will limit the SSS talent, and make it not O.P. Of course, Noan's life is not peaceful, and he does not leisurely use 'Almighty Fusion' to create super O.P monsters/heroes every day.. - "Will there be romance?" Hm... I will write about romance (not much ._.) but I'm not good at that thing. - "Harem?!" Of course, YES! Why not? - Why I rated my book 5*? I think everyone are know the reason (^_^) ***Finally: Hope all of you will like this book. Also, if you have any questions about the novel, you can leave them in the comments!

This story is more Jam packed with cliches then any I have ever read. The MC is a self-entitled jackass with MC syndrome with trust issues. Everyone in here seems to have negative IQ and it seems like the author has never had a normal human interaction in his life

to much face-slaping bullshit everyone in the story has around 3 braincells that's includes the mc and too much cliche . the only good thing is the world building

Any good reviews you see are paid reviews that really say nothing about the book (one of them even praises that it's in 3rd person) and every bad review isn't exaggerating in the slightest. To sum it up. Semi-decent world building, insufferable MC and side characters, plot holes everywhere, system isn't even OP, MC takes backshots from just about everyone, any female character is just an object of MC's lust and serve no actual purpose, other characters are 1 dimensional and have no logical reason behind acting like they do, plot is slow and sucks and if you've heard of a webnovel cliche, you'll find it in this novel

Idea and the premise is good, everything else is just bad. Multiple cliches and commonly used tropes. Subpar English with unnatural sentences.

he was supposed to get revenge on his family and in chapter 23 he let them rob him of 150 million, this is just trash

really had to give it low rating the idea was good...like till chapter 4 or something then author went full on toxic chinese fast-food dude survived a singularity which is something...and for 2 chapters straight ppl are looking down and shaming him not to mention the famous bet and face slap scene for no reason abusive parents steal money and harass mc who is a lord but is still publically humiliated and arrested..even the police knows he is innocent..but still does for some weird reason Mc is no excuse a poor sod with lot of issues and not likable romance is not good either coz he gotta alternate between blackmailer and dense mc read if u need to build up poison resistance.

First time im writing a review about a novel so i will be honest. The ideia behind the novel is good, but the author makes no sense of it, no world building, no explanations of how things came to be, no nothing. He forgets abouts the things says in chapters like, 1 example: MC(rank F) acts like a allmighty being against a B rank and challenges him to a fight in due a week?(1 month? dont really remember) then 3 to 4 chapters says that he has to "play low" (in a área wihlth ONLY F and E ranks) so that he doenst get in trouble like "stupids mcs" from others novels. Like wtf, did you forget about what you wrote in before!?!?!?!?....And guess what he did yes, because its been weeks and zero mention about the fight. 2 example: When MC entered the new zone with the new base there was a mention of an horde that would "challenge" the lords of the new zone in 10 days and once again the author totally forgot about that. There are so many more like this ones that its just sad. Im not telling you to give up on writing, but try to remake and improve before continuing to progressing the novel. Keep the consistency of his power.. If he can summon 20 skeletons in the new area everyday then in the chapter 95 he should have something like 200 skeletons( half at least F+) , or something like 20 E+/D and in the latest chapts author says he can already summon 60 skeletons a day(its been a while already so dont really remember) so MC should have an army of skeletons and you cant use the excuse of "sacrificing" them for power forever. You say one thing in chapter and another in the next. Once again, Im not telling you to give up, but a lot of improvement is needed. Im not an expert and not a writer, just a reader who gave his opinion. If you think Im wrong dont hesitate to let me know. Cumps,

Setting is interesting, some characters are neat but the story is woefully inconsistent. The author writes things and then either ignores them or forgets about them. This leads to ham fisted plot devices and inconsistent characters. An example: the character describes a useful feature, the feature is automatically activated, and yet as the plot advances you realize it could have only happened in the way it did if the feature didnt work. Characters will say things to other characters but when the plot requires it its like they never did, like that part of their character only exists when necessary. MC also alternates between extremely foolish and unrealistically smart. Hes more concerned with face slapping than development but also thinks bad people will just be nice again. Oh and also, I feel this needs to be said he is very cruel to an innocent woman and I wont say more to spoil that. Its not worth reading beyond free. Author needs to keep track of what he writes about his characters, if he did that he could make full use of an otherwise brilliant setting.

World Idea, great 👍 Timely Updated as well... Rest is meh... I really wanted to read it, but it gets really bad and forced as it goes further... The whole thing with his 'so-called family' was just a painful drama to read that I gave up... If I have to give a suggestion then I would say that the tone of writing in many parts of the story is straight up depressing... Yes, many parts require that sort of writing but overuse of such writing isn't the best...

Everything was going fine until you made his character dumb and cowardly

The story is so cliche and frustrating that I might have lost a couple of IQ points.

Honestly I hate this story it is garbage and I read a ton of stuff that is Chinese and translated. This author just write a MC that you will have for how stupid he is while also nursing him at every point he can get. really hope you turn this story around author but I won't be here to read it.

I have to say good start but in only 23 chapters he has built a world where there is no law system and only karens walk around. The MC died almost 3 times in 3 days but didn't grow smart or cautious but only arrogant. A world background and strength system that doesn't make sense and has plot holes as big as the death star and yeah I could go on a bit but I think it's enough. It's sad I really did like the novel but well I'm off gb.