Reincarnated as Ravel Phenex (DxD)

This book has potential but the writing quality messes it up things to fix writing quality: (broken sentences, missing words,missing punctuation marks) character relationships:(rias seemingly became hostile from ravel being riser's sister and because of ravel's words, why is she in the harem (seems like a good way to shoot yourself in the foot if they become close but never made up). sona (why was her peerage hostile upon meeting you should know ravel is royalty in devil society and all devil whom are a part of peerages are servants) in this case them put themselves in trouble because of since sona is aware of them they get in trouble at most but if this is done when she isn't there/or not aware they could die, no royal will take such disrespect from a servant. sona going from being hostile to somewhat nice back to hostile to nice again. also why would ravel's parents ask sona to let her live with her they the phenex are the richest house in the underworld they should buy a house in this case unlike the original where ravel liked Issei and requested her parents to ask Rais for ravel to stay with them. overall this story has high potential but because of the above things it feel hard to read and I pretty much have to force myself to read it I tried listening to the audio version but it's worst than reading

DROPPED THIS: she hides her power in an annoying way................................................................................................

This is honestly a really interesting read. This story has a lot of potential, and I can already tell it's working towards being a great one. As a fellow writer, you're doing a great job. Keep up the great writing at your own pace!

I haven’t seen many fanfics centered around Ravel, so this one immediately caught my eye. I absolutely loved it! While the writing is simple, that simplicity works well—it keeps the story engaging and easy to follow. can't wait what happens next. Keep up the great work! 😊

I haven't seen any fanfic with Ravel as the protagonist. Some of the reviews are misleading here. While the writing is simple, the author did prove him/her in this last chapter, that he/she can write in a different way too. I can she why the author wrote this way. It's basically to provide experience with your own eyes. He/She wants to imagine and think yourselves in replace of protagonist and hold the story's steering wheel with your hand. Overall, I like this fanfic.

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There is very little fanfiction featuring Ravel. I like this fanfiction where the main character is Ravel Phoenix. I'm waiting for the sequel!!!

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This is a wonderful fanfic to be told ,I'm liking it every day but It would be better not to show the other world powers she's obtained in the multiverse in the main world unless it is utmost necessary (the scene where Ravel used wood release to fight Riser, simple physical skills are already enough to subdue him though) + I really wish that Rias Gremory not be in the harem (Truth be told I don't know why I don't even like her)

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Do you have a Patreon? Really like the story keep it up