[A Harry Potter Fanfiction]
Decades after the war Harry Potter has everything in life, wealth, fame, power, etc but nothing to live for.
Just when Harry thinks that he will lead a lonely existence for the rest of his life, he his approached by an old friend Death.
Death offers Harry a chance to go back to live a life he was always meant to, but can he fix the past while Harry himself is a little broken.
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I expected improvement as this was supposed to be a "rewrite", but alas, I'm very much disappointed. A lot of plot holes and massively unbelievable shit going on in this story (eg. (1) Ollivander just giving thr elder wand to the mc, because it doesn't work for Dumbledore anymore; (2) aside from Harry and his twin, Rose, they supposedly twin younger sibs, but they literally got erased in the story once Lillian was introduced; (3) Charlus, the grandfather of Harry didn't know that his wife (Dorea) was sorted in Slytherin....and other bizarre shit in the story)
over all, I love the plot. But if you cut out the padding of info dumping on your magical theory , your first release would 20 chapters less. I'm pretty sure J.K learned something from it for her next books. Please just keep writing the compelling plot that keeps us wanting more. Please let me change this to a 5 out of 5.
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