Forgotten Lineage
Author: HeavensJudge
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Hagan, a orphan from the outskirts from Citadel 1, is at the lowest point in his life when his mother is killed right before him. In a state of grief and shock, he begins to aimlessly wander around, as he walks, finds himself somehow transported to a mysterious, mountainous region. He confronts a terrifying beast and ends up nearly dying upon an altar. Hagan then learns that he is not longer on Earth, and is now in another world called the New Plain, a sanctuary crafted by divine beings.
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Depictions of strong violence. Read at your own discretion.
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Tons of potential. Loving this read. Definitely some things that could be built on and workshopped, but also some things that are amazing additions to a story that keep it alive. I love the writing quality. Feels like I'm actually holding a book instead of being on a laptop. The updates come fast and if a typo is found it is fixed quickly, almost as fast as it came. The characters and elements are explained in a detailed way that very effectively portray the appearance and mechanisms written. The world background is explained well but could be delved into more, explaining the world, how it came up, and how the economic factions exist with each other. In conclusion this is a well brought up and formulating story, and I can't wait to see where it goes.
What the fuck did I just read?. was the text written by a mentally retarded child? ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............
Writing a fake review on my book so if there are any questions or comments, you can reply to this and I will try to answer the best I can.
I see a lot of authors promise how many words each chapter is gonna have, and I honestly think that's a bad idea. It just becomes a burden after enough time. don't write because you remixed us too, wrote because you want to.
An interesting idea, although it is almost completely removed from the shadow slave, but I will not condemn it. The only thing is a lot of awards to the hero.