Forgotten Lineage
Author: HeavensJudge
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Hagan, an orphan from the outskirts of an dystopian city, must face the dreadful First Trial and conquer it in order to survive. During his First Trial, he unknowingly becomes a sacrifice to the dead Gods and receives their Blessing. A Forgotten Lineage is bestowed upon Hagan, he must find a way to return it to its former glory.
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Tons of potential. Loving this read. Definitely some things that could be built on and workshopped, but also some things that are amazing additions to a story that keep it alive. I love the writing quality. Feels like I'm actually holding a book instead of being on a laptop. The updates come fast and if a typo is found it is fixed quickly, almost as fast as it came. The characters and elements are explained in a detailed way that very effectively portray the appearance and mechanisms written. The world background is explained well but could be delved into more, explaining the world, how it came up, and how the economic factions exist with each other. In conclusion this is a well brought up and formulating story, and I can't wait to see where it goes.
Writing a fake review on my book so if there are any questions or comments, you can reply to this and I will try to answer the best I can.
I see a lot of authors promise how many words each chapter is gonna have, and I honestly think that's a bad idea. It just becomes a burden after enough time. don't write because you remixed us too, wrote because you want to.
An interesting idea, although it is almost completely removed from the shadow slave, but I will not condemn it. The only thing is a lot of awards to the hero.