The story of a Boy who has power's and his sister lives with him but the world is apocalyptic

Fallen In Apocalypse

ACTION

ADVENTURE

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APOCALYPSE

I loved the chapter 1 I thought the main character would be overpowering but he is normal but has unique abilities. It is different 

🤔At some space, the pacing and flow seems off, you need to work on that, and try to read out your story as much as possible wants you are done, or use text to speech, that way you can easily detect when something doesn't flow well.

Overall, you character design and world building are great, much to know, but 👍you are doing great, keep it up.