When Peter is transported to a brutal, system-driven world where every individual gains power, skills, and a clear path forward through their System… he gets nothing. No stats. No abilities. Just straw sandals and a looming death sentence.
Forced into a military training regime where strength determines survival, Peter must rely on sheer grit, sharp wit, and an unconventional cultivation path alongside his fiercely determined ally, Thea, and the kind-hearted healer, Elric. Together, they must navigate grueling battles, deadly beasts, and the oppressive weight of a world designed for those blessed by the System.
But Peter refuses to accept his fate. If the System won’t grant him power, he’ll carve his own path—one bruised knuckle and painstaking cultivation session at a time.
I absolutely love 💕 the writing style—the intricate world-building, the deep, compelling characters, and, of course, our beloved system 🤣. Yeah, I know, not funny—but you get the point!
This is truly a wonderful story, i thought i'd read a few more chapters before reviewing but fuck it, i'm so hooked. The pacing is good, the writing is excellent and the storyline is just interesting, not to mention the MCs hilarious nature😂Anyway i totally recommend this novel, you'll love it. Good job to the author once again👍
While POV stories aren't really my cup of tea, I find myself invested, having read only to chapter two so far. Yet, I'm a fan. Excellent storytelling. Highly recommended.
Thanks for this book alexjbq i am loving this book i defintely can relate with the mc he is just like me haha.Don't stop author i'm loving it
Just caught up to the latest chapter. I have to say, so far, this is a wonderful piece of work, the MC isn't just some other overpowered guy, he caries dept and let's us feel for him. The author does a good job shying away from the usual boring tropes. And he does a great job with the 1st person narration. This is a good read, no doubt.
I must say it's a pretty decent novel, with a relatable MC (I LOVE THE DAMN MC😅🌹). I had a few laughs from reading this and was quite impressed with the writing style. My only problem is the length of the chapters, for a webnovel its's too long and some times staring at all those words I'm yet to read becomes a bore. Nonetheless I'm I love with this novel. The MC is basically me, and for that i love it!. I'd advise any passerbys to ignore the flaws(if there's any) and give this damn novel a try.
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