Legacy of the Void Fleet
In a universe where starships rule supreme and galactic empires clash for dominance, Kallus, a visionary gamer and strategist, finds himself thrust into an extraordinary reality.
Awakened aboard the [Obliterator-Class Star Dreadnought], a vessel born from his own imagination but perfected by a Supreme Being, Kallus must rise to command a fleet that could shape the fate of the cosmos.
With a ship forged from mythical adamantium and [mithril alloys], powered by a [Transcendent Dark Matter Engine], and armed with weapons capable of annihilating entire fleets, the Obliterator is more than a warship—it’s a legend incarnate. But Kallus is not alone. Alongside him is the Red Empress, an advanced AI infused with a power of creation and knowledge itself, guiding him with missions that unlock untold power and potential.
Hello everyone it's the author here , first of all I would like to thank you to everyone one of you who have read my book and supported it up until now , it's really a big thing to me and if any of you have any feedback on the book I would appreciate each of your thoughts, and if possible I'll reply to everyone of you , thanks for your time .
This has potential😀hope it continues
Please Continue The Story. Release more chapters. I already have a feeling this story is going to be great . Please don't drop it ............................................................................................................................................................................................. ..............................................................................................................................
With just the 13 free chapters available, it's extremely evident chatGPT did a lot of the heavy lifting while writing this novel. The concept is very interesting, and the first few chapters are by far the best simply because it's not extremely evident that it was made using AI or with help from it, but after the initial introduction, roughly around chapter 6, its just a slog of AI generated topics with a few changes made here and there by the author so it would fit the story, before changing into an AI generated exchange between characters. It wouldn't be an issue using AI if the chapters were at the very least engaging to read, but the amount of repetition and useless back and forth, combined with the massive amounts of flavor text that is simply there to increase wordcount, just really kills it. I'm not reading past the free chapters, and I can't really recommend it either, unless you don't mind the AI. if anyone decides to do it: beware of heavy text dumps and poorly explained exposition.
so far its been awesome I love these kinds of books and there hard to find but getting the same information 3 different times just worded slightly differently in either the same chapter or the very next is really annoying especially when I'm paying for the chapter other then that loving it so far and I'm gonna stick with it and hopefully the author improves and keeps with it cause I would hate to spend money on this just for it to be dropped like so many other books
It shows promise. The story has a good foundation so far. The main issues I have with it are that multiple paragraphs are frequently repeated copy-paste right next to eachother or at the start of a new chapter, and that in my opinion there is a lot of focus on earth, despite it being essentially ants compared to the void fleet. I get the whole make a good impression on the people of earth and stuff, but I feel like it doesn’t need as many chapters (that’s personal opinion, others may feel differently)
This is better than what I thought it would be.👍
It's been sometime since I opened this app , as I was reading from epub books , I wanted to read something refreshing and new , I found this book a bit back , but it had only 5 6 chapters so didn't read it much , now I gave this book my 1 hour and it was good , the author's new and trying to improve his writing and book , it's evident . This book really has some untapped potential, hope the author does justice to his book and I can read it fully . ps:- a really long and lame review but I tried doing justice to my thoughts .
although I don't read books alot but I got this free session and I started reading this book , its' promising and enjoyable to read , the authors's new and if you see his later chapters there's clear improvement in writing and story , it's got potential , hope the author brings goes like this and keep this book ongoing .
This has pontential but, I was wondering how well it would fare against the “Sweet Liberty” from the Warhammer40k fanfic “The Primarch of liberty”
okay so , I have read all the books from chrome and telegram , I wanted to try something different , I came to web novel and to be true it's the first book I saw here on my phone , first few chapters were awesome and felt relaxing to read , the authors's new and has this raw potential in his writing and imagination , although I haven't read many of the chapters but this can be good , hope the author continues and keeps improving . p.s:- you should retouch some early chapters , they can use some refining.
books nice , its casual and not uselessly big on details according to me , last i read and now that I read it again , the author has reworked the free chapters and it's better now this way , Appreciate your work author , keep up the good work.
enjoyed reading it , keep it coming author.
overall , there are some points I liked and some I thought were crude and needs fixing , but I liked it .
Personally , I enjoyed the ship part of this book and I think if the author doesn't mess up it can be something great , let's see.