Aether Chronicles: Birth Of A Legend

Want epic battles? Magic academies? Dungeon diving? A good plot? Then Aether Chronicles is the novel for you. It's an improvement over my previous stories.

Like it so far, has a lot of potential to be great in the future

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So far so good. I love the setting and magic system of this world which is simple yet good. Going to let the chapters build up before reading again.

I hate to say this, but Lord Negan is guilty of a grave crime. He will be sanctioned for creating an amazing novel and not having more chapters out for it!!!

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Story is really good. Impressive fight scenes. A lot of authors struggle with properly formulating a fight but pretty much all of them in this story have been amazing so far. The power system seems cool but we haven’t seen the Mc progress within it as he has only really done a bunch of physical training. He has spent the last 13 months (I think) fighting monsters in a forest that vastly outclass him. He can take on monsters and people who are way 2 tiers beyond him quit easily. Can take on things 3 tiers beyond him with high difficulty and can keep his life in a fight against being 4 tiers beyond him but is pretty weakened after the case. I only have one problem with the story (which is the reason I give it 4 stars instead of 5). The author puts in to many flashbacks. Some of them are useful and provide us information but others are right after a week long time skip. Don’t do a week long time skip and have a character arrive at the academy just to do a flash back 2 chapters later that talks about part of their journey to the academy. I don’t think the author should completely get rid of the flashbacks as they have provided very useful information without it feeling like an info dump, but the sheer amount be have gotten needs to be lowered. Nothing is worse than getting to a cool moment in a story and being hyped for the next days chapter only to find out you have to wait 3 -4 more days for a flashback that came out of nowhere to end.