-----------------------------------++++great work is it original or translation if it is translation what is the name of the original
a month ago
24
Secret_Lotus
I dont have anything against the broly at all but the story just doesn't make sense to me, he goes to the records of ragnarok and destroys the Gods there without even considering the feats of the said gods then the girls on the group chat acts more of a hoe than their original characters, It might be Au but still doesn't make sense to me, so I will drop it here good luck author, do your best and my well wishes for you.
a month ago
22
captainfatbelly
90% sure its a harem so I'm gonna drop it
a month ago
16
Soaringray
This is a great story Mann I just wish there were at least 2-3 chapters a day so I don't get left on cliffhangers but that would probably put a lot of strain on the writer to do so but it's nice to dream 😆
a month ago
9
Harbinger9901
Okay… So super ‘Broly’ understand his father is a evil man (he is not) claims to know that the TOP is far away, gets visited by the frezia force duo and still thinks so.
Some in the group chat: BROLY IS THE LEGENDARY SUPER SAYIAN HE IS STRONG! (Proceeds to talk about how they know about him, then says dragon ball doesn’t exist in her world but she simply knows.)
Honestly here is what you can expect from the MC. He is mentally unstable and legally should not be allowed to live by themselves.
The Author has no idea what they are saying.
Respect to the translator for having to read the nonsense.
21 days ago
8
StupidUserName
It may not be the most well written or the most nuanced fanfic that I have ever read but it is most certainly a great-er- legendary read.
This FanFiction certainly has spirit and fun, at least at the moment it does. I would recommended that you read if you don’t mind ignoring a few typos and errors.
a month ago
5
Breckie_Smith
Hey! I hope you’re doing well. I just wanted to say how much I admire your amazing writing talent—your story really left an impression on me, and I’d love to chat with you about it. I’m a commission-based digital artist and have worked on comics with authors across different platforms. I genuinely think your story would make a fantastic comic! You can also check out my work on DeviantArt under the name VanessaWick
Feel free to reach out to me on Discord: losserishere
Or on Twitter: @tirtatare
Nice idea and plot isnt too bad , but the characters are just too different from the original and most of their interactions are rigid and odd. Its just my opinion but if you are adding characters. You should always priorotize keeping the characters closest to their original character. Whenever they are main or side characters.
a month ago
1
Thomas_Begley_1450
I agree with everyone this is amazing. hope you don't drop gonna give all my stones so please continue with this story. .
a month ago
1
INFINITESTORAGE
Please DO NOT DROP IMMA GIVE STONES EVERYDAY TILL THIS FINISHED.
a month ago
1
Kratos2785
This story has really stuck out to me because this guy has the Mc embody the character of broly in a way I think we all would imagine it being like also the story is fast paced and gets to the point without leaving a bunch of stuff out and doesn't take forever to get to the action. PS he doesn't downscale broly's power
a month ago
1
Blake_Langton
Loving this so far. Especially the brutal slaughter of the gods 🤩🫡
a month ago
1
Praise_TheSun
Very good keep going author dont stop [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
a month ago
1
R0B
Great so far, need more chaps.
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-----------------------------------++++great work is it original or translation if it is translation what is the name of the original
I dont have anything against the broly at all but the story just doesn't make sense to me, he goes to the records of ragnarok and destroys the Gods there without even considering the feats of the said gods then the girls on the group chat acts more of a hoe than their original characters, It might be Au but still doesn't make sense to me, so I will drop it here good luck author, do your best and my well wishes for you.
90% sure its a harem so I'm gonna drop it
This is a great story Mann I just wish there were at least 2-3 chapters a day so I don't get left on cliffhangers but that would probably put a lot of strain on the writer to do so but it's nice to dream 😆
Okay… So super ‘Broly’ understand his father is a evil man (he is not) claims to know that the TOP is far away, gets visited by the frezia force duo and still thinks so. Some in the group chat: BROLY IS THE LEGENDARY SUPER SAYIAN HE IS STRONG! (Proceeds to talk about how they know about him, then says dragon ball doesn’t exist in her world but she simply knows.) Honestly here is what you can expect from the MC. He is mentally unstable and legally should not be allowed to live by themselves. The Author has no idea what they are saying. Respect to the translator for having to read the nonsense.
It may not be the most well written or the most nuanced fanfic that I have ever read but it is most certainly a great-er- legendary read. This FanFiction certainly has spirit and fun, at least at the moment it does. I would recommended that you read if you don’t mind ignoring a few typos and errors.
Hey! I hope you’re doing well. I just wanted to say how much I admire your amazing writing talent—your story really left an impression on me, and I’d love to chat with you about it. I’m a commission-based digital artist and have worked on comics with authors across different platforms. I genuinely think your story would make a fantastic comic! You can also check out my work on DeviantArt under the name VanessaWick Feel free to reach out to me on Discord: losserishere Or on Twitter: @tirtatare
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Nice idea and plot isnt too bad , but the characters are just too different from the original and most of their interactions are rigid and odd. Its just my opinion but if you are adding characters. You should always priorotize keeping the characters closest to their original character. Whenever they are main or side characters.
I agree with everyone this is amazing. hope you don't drop gonna give all my stones so please continue with this story. .
Please DO NOT DROP IMMA GIVE STONES EVERYDAY TILL THIS FINISHED.
This story has really stuck out to me because this guy has the Mc embody the character of broly in a way I think we all would imagine it being like also the story is fast paced and gets to the point without leaving a bunch of stuff out and doesn't take forever to get to the action. PS he doesn't downscale broly's power
Loving this so far. Especially the brutal slaughter of the gods 🤩🫡
Very good keep going author dont stop [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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