I dont have anything against the broly at all but the story just doesn't make sense to me, he goes to the records of ragnarok and destroys the Gods there without even considering the feats of the said gods then the girls on the group chat acts more of a hoe than their original characters, It might be Au but still doesn't make sense to me, so I will drop it here good luck author, do your best and my well wishes for you.
2 months ago
24
cosmicRider
-----------------------------------++++great work is it original or translation if it is translation what is the name of the original
3 months ago
24
captainfatbelly
90% sure its a harem so I'm gonna drop it
2 months ago
16
Soaringray
This is a great story Mann I just wish there were at least 2-3 chapters a day so I don't get left on cliffhangers but that would probably put a lot of strain on the writer to do so but it's nice to dream 😆
2 months ago
9
Harbinger9901
Okay… So super ‘Broly’ understand his father is a evil man (he is not) claims to know that the TOP is far away, gets visited by the frezia force duo and still thinks so.
Some in the group chat: BROLY IS THE LEGENDARY SUPER SAYIAN HE IS STRONG! (Proceeds to talk about how they know about him, then says dragon ball doesn’t exist in her world but she simply knows.)
Honestly here is what you can expect from the MC. He is mentally unstable and legally should not be allowed to live by themselves.
The Author has no idea what they are saying.
Respect to the translator for having to read the nonsense.
2 months ago
8
StupidUserName
It may not be the most well written or the most nuanced fanfic that I have ever read but it is most certainly a great-er- legendary read.
This FanFiction certainly has spirit and fun, at least at the moment it does. I would recommended that you read if you don’t mind ignoring a few typos and errors.
2 months ago
5
Breckie_Smith
Hey! I hope you’re doing well. I just wanted to say how much I admire your amazing writing talent—your story really left an impression on me, and I’d love to chat with you about it. I’m a commission-based digital artist and have worked on comics with authors across different platforms. I genuinely think your story would make a fantastic comic! You can also check out my work on DeviantArt under the name VanessaWick
Feel free to reach out to me on Discord: losserishere
Or on Twitter: @tirtatare
2 months ago
4
eroskun
It was a disappointment.
Too much chat group meaningless nonsense. Sometimes even the entire chapter is just the members going on and on about just irrelevant crap, and then follow by the author narrating us how things went down in the original story just to make the chapter "longer".
The protagonist (are most women btw) don't act like the actual protagonists at all, but instead as sluts throwing themselves at the slightest glance of protagonist (I know this is a Chinese fanfic, but the protagonist in this story is the Chinese traverser, the rest should be, at least according to this fanfic, the original protagonists of their world but they act Chinese somehow)
Maybe there are ppl out there rating this so high they actually liked this, but personally I find too hard to read.
For anyone that liked this kudos, and good luck to the author.
Nice idea and plot isnt too bad , but the characters are just too different from the original and most of their interactions are rigid and odd. Its just my opinion but if you are adding characters. You should always priorotize keeping the characters closest to their original character. Whenever they are main or side characters.
2 months ago
1
Thomas_Begley_1450
I agree with everyone this is amazing. hope you don't drop gonna give all my stones so please continue with this story. .
2 months ago
1
INFINITESTORAGE
Please DO NOT DROP IMMA GIVE STONES EVERYDAY TILL THIS FINISHED.
2 months ago
1
Kratos2785
This story has really stuck out to me because this guy has the Mc embody the character of broly in a way I think we all would imagine it being like also the story is fast paced and gets to the point without leaving a bunch of stuff out and doesn't take forever to get to the action. PS he doesn't downscale broly's power
2 months ago
1
Blake_Langton
Loving this so far. Especially the brutal slaughter of the gods 🤩🫡
2 months ago
1
Praise_TheSun
Very good keep going author dont stop [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I dont have anything against the broly at all but the story just doesn't make sense to me, he goes to the records of ragnarok and destroys the Gods there without even considering the feats of the said gods then the girls on the group chat acts more of a hoe than their original characters, It might be Au but still doesn't make sense to me, so I will drop it here good luck author, do your best and my well wishes for you.
-----------------------------------++++great work is it original or translation if it is translation what is the name of the original
90% sure its a harem so I'm gonna drop it
This is a great story Mann I just wish there were at least 2-3 chapters a day so I don't get left on cliffhangers but that would probably put a lot of strain on the writer to do so but it's nice to dream 😆
Okay… So super ‘Broly’ understand his father is a evil man (he is not) claims to know that the TOP is far away, gets visited by the frezia force duo and still thinks so. Some in the group chat: BROLY IS THE LEGENDARY SUPER SAYIAN HE IS STRONG! (Proceeds to talk about how they know about him, then says dragon ball doesn’t exist in her world but she simply knows.) Honestly here is what you can expect from the MC. He is mentally unstable and legally should not be allowed to live by themselves. The Author has no idea what they are saying. Respect to the translator for having to read the nonsense.
It may not be the most well written or the most nuanced fanfic that I have ever read but it is most certainly a great-er- legendary read. This FanFiction certainly has spirit and fun, at least at the moment it does. I would recommended that you read if you don’t mind ignoring a few typos and errors.
Hey! I hope you’re doing well. I just wanted to say how much I admire your amazing writing talent—your story really left an impression on me, and I’d love to chat with you about it. I’m a commission-based digital artist and have worked on comics with authors across different platforms. I genuinely think your story would make a fantastic comic! You can also check out my work on DeviantArt under the name VanessaWick Feel free to reach out to me on Discord: losserishere Or on Twitter: @tirtatare
It was a disappointment. Too much chat group meaningless nonsense. Sometimes even the entire chapter is just the members going on and on about just irrelevant crap, and then follow by the author narrating us how things went down in the original story just to make the chapter "longer". The protagonist (are most women btw) don't act like the actual protagonists at all, but instead as sluts throwing themselves at the slightest glance of protagonist (I know this is a Chinese fanfic, but the protagonist in this story is the Chinese traverser, the rest should be, at least according to this fanfic, the original protagonists of their world but they act Chinese somehow) Maybe there are ppl out there rating this so high they actually liked this, but personally I find too hard to read. For anyone that liked this kudos, and good luck to the author.
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Nice idea and plot isnt too bad , but the characters are just too different from the original and most of their interactions are rigid and odd. Its just my opinion but if you are adding characters. You should always priorotize keeping the characters closest to their original character. Whenever they are main or side characters.
I agree with everyone this is amazing. hope you don't drop gonna give all my stones so please continue with this story. .
Please DO NOT DROP IMMA GIVE STONES EVERYDAY TILL THIS FINISHED.
This story has really stuck out to me because this guy has the Mc embody the character of broly in a way I think we all would imagine it being like also the story is fast paced and gets to the point without leaving a bunch of stuff out and doesn't take forever to get to the action. PS he doesn't downscale broly's power
Loving this so far. Especially the brutal slaughter of the gods 🤩🫡
Very good keep going author dont stop [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]