Omnitrix in MCU

So I have read many comments tell now it chap 40 till now ok some people said about him using upgrade write well I was not goona tell but he doesn't have upgrade why you ask because unlike some people saying he has all aliens available which I never said he has and people not thinking why Omnitrix even had 10 minutes timeout and why ben changing in other alien when he wanted another is that Omnitrix is programmed such that ben don't overly relay on one alien and there are more information available on Omnitrix with theory which are to much to say here and the reason for choosing classic Omnitrix has its reason for story which you guys will understand in future and those people who like ultimatrix remember why it was taken away from ben in ben 10 ultimatrix what was it's role hope I had cleared some quary's happy reading 🙃🤧 and also read my original novel to support me 🥹🤧

Do not give Up author .You have something good here and the last fanfic too just try to follow your own history and do not the history of a reader i mean anyone can comment about any things but just keep in your line.

This novel is doomed the first one was better but this the author destroyed her because he listens to much from the readers if keep like this this novel will not go anywhere the first when I read it I complete all chapters and I wished for more but this man six chapters and I am bored.

Writing quality is quite good and update stability is fine too so about story development it is quite interesting and enjoyable well hope author will maintain this rating

hey author you've made great changes here in current story.... although the process of making PC, AI and OS is still fast but I guess it's with in reasonable range please don't make him king of the world before story starts I mean even Tony stark got started for real after he suffered some setbacks.... which was the real motivation for him I suggest that you give him reason for his drive that's what all human need to grow either good or bad otherwise if there's no drive no one will work 🤷🏻‍♂️ also make him original villains that are solely focus on our mc instead of mc going around messing with other heros villain, I mean I hope that you're mc is not a nanny or attention seeker that just messes with every villain just for sake of messing 😅 it's humanly tiring to do so keeping track of every bad guy like even tony with world most powerful ai and shield being most powerful organization don't just jumps around everywhere because it's not feasible also you can grow along with time like no need to introduce nano bots before time, heres the thing Howard stark was genius but he was limited by his time period which is factual thing.... 😁

OK. THERE WILL BE SOME SPOILERS AHEAD! I decided to read up to chapter 10 so that I could give a proper ish review. The grammar is fine. No major unreadable errors or such. Updates are solid and fast it seems. The pacing it's... let's say that is strange at the very least. Characters are the basically mostly stabilized by their respective media when it comes to the known characters such as Peter parker or Ned. The world seems to be an alt mcu. Now I have a few complaints about this Ben Ten. An isekaid into the alternative version of Ben in this case actually. So he has the omniverse version with aparrently a loooot of aliens available already... as soon as he wakes up in this reality he decides to keep it on the down low so hydra and such do not find him and also that he should get authority and make money. Up till there it's all good. But what gets to me is that the first 6 chapters that equates to basically 2.5 months or so... is him making a ultra pc from scratch (oh he also stole some ram and ddr) for about 4 weeks, he created his own operating system in about 3 weeks and he created his own ai and ai core in 20 days... SO... how long would it really take if he has aliens such as freaking greymatter(smartest of all)!! Upgrade(technokinesis by possession/ nanites bullshitery/ upgrade gallore)!! Jury rigg(make, brake or fix anything from litteral thash)!! And brainstorm(also technokinesis by electrokinises/ advances calculating prowers)!!???? I mean some may take a few weeks if you don't have the right materials for it... but come on!! 2 months?? Nah!! That's bs! That's the end of my rant. Sorry about that. Anyways the story it's okay but don't know if I'll come back to it to continue reading. Good luck to the author and yall!

Historia 10/10, usa a sabedoria dos personagens de maneira certa, sem enrolação. escrita do autor é muito gostosa de ler, as atualizações são rápidas.

Don't read any review and continue doing your work, author. As for readers just give it a try like i did and you will certainly enjoy it. Don't lister to people who are complaining.

This rewrite in terms of plot development and development of secondary characters is better, but when we talk about the development of MC is much worse than the original story, in this rewrite lacks common sense and intelligence, he became a generic protagonist, when the charm that this MC had in the previous story was his prudence in using the Omnitrix to save others and did not use it as blatantly as in this version and most importantly showed a certain selfishness that made it more realistic. One of the best hits of the previous version was how the MC created a technology company, in that world there are many geniuses so it would not be strange that the MC would pass for one of them and also with gray matter would be in the top of the most intelligent of the Marvel universe, perhaps only one or 2 would be above him as Reed Richards.

I read your novel before you rewrote it and stopped because it was so fast-paced with technology, so I hope I don't make the same mistake. You have a technological advancement that I don't have, and people are ready for it. That was in 2004. The magic of technology is to improve on what's gone before and make something new. At a good pace. that make as feel the happines that mc have when he finish. by the way am gonna read the rewrite again because i realy love your write and story . good luck

Really did a good job correcting does grammar 💯 I just hope your release rate won't drop. #KeepUpTheGoodWork 👏 .....................................................HO3WPF44UYL665RBHO3WPF44UYL665RBHO3WPF44UYL665RBHO3WPF44UYL665RBHO3WPF44UYL665RBHO3WPF44UYL665RBHO3WPF44UYL665RBHO3WPF44UYL665RBHO3WPF44UYL665RBHO3WPF44UYL665RBHO3WPF44UYL665RBHO3WPF44UYL665RBHO3WPF44UYL665RBHO3WPF44UYL665RBHO3WPF44UYL665RBHO3WPF44UYL665RBHO3WPF44UYL665RBHO3WPF44UYL665RBHO3WPF44UYL665RBHO3WPF44UYL665RBHO3WPF44UYL665RBHO3WPF44UYL665RBHO3WPF44UYL665RBHO3WPF44UYL665RBHO3WPF44UYL665RBHO3WPF44UYL665RBHO3WPF44UYL665RBHO3WPF44UYL665RBHO3WPF44UYL665RBHO3WPF44UYL665RBHO3WPF44UYL665RBHO3WPF44UYL665RBHO3WPF44UYL665RBHO3WPF44UYL665RBHO3WPF44UYL665RBHO3WPF44UYL665RB

so far... this story is about the mc creating twitter and instagram and forming a company creating tech and stuff... author completely forgot he has the omnitrix.. in like 40 chapters i only fought 2 or 3 times? with it.. against the lizard, and that was somewhat early.. after that? he never uses it-.- im gonna read further in spite of myself to see if the omnitrix is ever used again..

I love it Keep up the great work and hope to see Ultimate alien in the future.....

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