In a world divided by realms, each brimming with vibrant cultures and lurking dangers, siblings Emilia and Pasta set out to experience the thrill of an adventure before returning home. Accompanied by their bodyguard, a renowned swordsman, they venture across lands on the brink of war, where ambition and the lust for power threaten to consume everything. And who else can stop this but three quirky adventurers?
As the trio navigate mysterious lands and encounters both allies and adversaries, the swordsman must protect his charges while confronting the shadows of his past.
You have some very well defined characters, even the ones we don’t know very well yet and humor sprinkled in all the right places💜 watch out for Mr Swordsman!!!!
First chapter in and I'm instantly hooked. A bit disappointing as it only has two chapters, but please keep up updating as I will be supporting this novel. The world building is great, pacing is absolutely fantastic it felt like I was in the book and fully immersed. How you portray the characters make me feel hatred (looking at you, Ragnar) and awe. Overall, a great novel in the making!
I just have to say Emilia is my absolute favorite character hands down. I don’t even know why, but she just hits different. This novel feels like a hidden gem. The fight scenes, the comedy and characters all on point it feels like I'm literally in the book. This is peak storytelling, and it’s honestly criminal how underrated it is. Amazing work, author. Please, please don’t stop posting
I can't bro imma stop right now because if I don't I will get a cliff hanger because it currently has only 11 chapters! This is soooo good! I can't explain it it's just that-! I can feel the momentum ya know? like the aura and the atmosphere of place and the people and how Mr. Passerby-Swordsman just appears and shows who's the boss! The names are good too and easy to remember and the writing style? Perfect!
Love the book honestly. A great Read, Keep up the good work Author. When will the next chapter be out tho 🥲
A truly fantastic novel, with highly detailed and well-executed descriptions. The dialogues are also strong. However, some chapters feel a bit lengthy, and certain details could be condensed. Overall, it’s a great read!
Bro, I love how you wrote the first chapter. You started with a bar and an adventure, and I love how you placed the characters. It hooked me and made me want to read the second chapter. Your writing is so good—keep it up! I hope one day your book gets more views and reaches its peak.
You have something good going on here, Author. Don't stop.
It's good, really is. Better than I expected. Like the characters and their interactions. like the swordsman~ I think he is awesome. Like the story, It's really engaging. Also, Good first chapter. keep up the good work, author.
This is an engaging blend of adventure, fantasy, and character-driven storytelling. I love the protagonists' journey, it is filled with unexpected twists, humor, and heartfelt moments that resonate on an emotional level. Good job!
Actually, I felt a little bored in the early chapters, but the author's descriptions and writing style helped me visualize everything in my mind. The more I read, the more interesting it became... Nice work author... I hope you can update every day...
your story is masterpeace characters development is attractive hook readers for more keep going it is good work and i will rate it so far 5 star.