I'm just hoping this doesn't end as a harem fic... this shit is fire (Cuz Natsu, you get it?) as fuck. And romance really doesn't fit to Natsu, even if it's been shown on the manga that he's fallen for lucy. Harem usually just makes fics trash because it's not really possible to write something good while trying to make the mc as a woman slayer when he is clearly not
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a bit of romance with one or two would really help with the character development. I know it is really hard to create a Well written harem story but I believe you can do it. I mean there are only few goood fairy tail fanfics, and you have written one of best. my favorite is momo and Mina. they both have the perks and characterstics of lucy. It would also help if you could expand on the day to day life of the characters giving them more character development. I hope you finish this fanfic.
I'm just hoping this doesn't end as a harem fic... this shit is fire (Cuz Natsu, you get it?) as fuck. And romance really doesn't fit to Natsu, even if it's been shown on the manga that he's fallen for lucy. Harem usually just makes fics trash because it's not really possible to write something good while trying to make the mc as a woman slayer when he is clearly not
a bit of romance with one or two would really help with the character development. I know it is really hard to create a Well written harem story but I believe you can do it. I mean there are only few goood fairy tail fanfics, and you have written one of best. my favorite is momo and Mina. they both have the perks and characterstics of lucy. It would also help if you could expand on the day to day life of the characters giving them more character development. I hope you finish this fanfic.