Tales of the DragonHeart: AshBorn

Quite Shameless of me to give myself 5 starts, but I had to do it. This story is my first shot on trying to becoming a well established writer. As I writer i am very open to my reader's reviews, and take very single comment to heart. I promise to improve my writing with each passing chapter and give you guys a story you will remember and be satisfied with. So just read the novel, I promise you will Love it

I really like the story. I love how it gives time for the the reader to connect with the characters and it's not just all action but a nice family enjoying life. The world building is a great point and with only 10 chapters as of now, I am surprised how much i enjoyed the series. I wish the author returns quickly after his exams. Can't wait for the next chapter 🩷🩷🩷

Damn it, Ash! I've been trying to get some reviews on my book, and I leave you alone for three days, and you already have like 9 people in your review section. *Sigh*.

the author has put a lot of effort on this its pretty obvious, The world building is one of its strong points, so as the reader I hope you enjoy the story

Here is my review abouy this book: Worldbuilding: I think the worldbuilding in this one is quite nice with the good description and the mythical creatures in there. Overall, its a nice fantasy world. Characters: The main character, Ash Born is both funny, cool, and has an eagerful.spirit too especially with him slowly learning about the power. The side characters for me is supportive and likeable such as Ash Born family and the elf King. Pacing: The pacing of this story can be fast sometimes, but I think it needa to be tone down a bit to make it smoother. Overall, its nice book and I do enjoy reqding it

Skyrim sure does take on a whole new meaning with this one. Alright, that was a joke. But on the more "reviewy" side of things, here we have an MC that's (and you guessed it) reincarnated into a world filled with dragons, yada yada. Not being a fantasy man myself, but a Christian, it's imperative that we look past the genre and see what the author's trying to convey. So, the premise seems to be more on the comical side while mixing in that fantasy-type of lore most are used to. Some of the phrases like "DragonHeart" really make me feel like I'm reading a story out of a video game. But hey, when your MC's a mix of different fantastical creatures often read about in folklore, it's apparent that the author's really trying to fill the reader's heart with some adventure tales. How about the side characters? Well, not surprisingly, most of them are written quite well. Reborn in a new world where war's apparent? Here are two parents: a Duke and a Duchess. Speaking of the new world, not too bad, author. The world-building was crafted well enough for me to know that there's enough out there in this universe for you (as a writer) to also explore. Just don't let your imagination run too wild. Lol. We'll end things off by saying that this novel's not on the whole dark side and has some funny quips. If you like heartwarming family bonding as a beginning trope, then just maybe your journey in this novel might be an interesting one. That's considering that this review was written with less than chapters released.

The story is pure fun, and the fights are absolutely epic, and the world? It feels REAL, and ALIVE. I am at a lack of words for the absolutely fantastic job the author has done.

Ashborn is an unexpectedly enjoyable read with a likable MC and a great balance of humour that makes the story engaging. The comical vibe feels natural, and the well-written dialogue flows smoothly, making character interactions entertaining. The short, digestible chapters make it easy to binge without realising it. Perfect for both casual and dedicated readers. With its lighthearted yet immersive storytelling, this isekai novel is a great pick for anyone looking for a fun and effortless read.

Wow! Superb! He is a talented writer. He'll reach peak

A great start to a fantasy story. it is clear the author puts a lot of effort in world building and the writing is good. Good luck on the new book.

When I was 3 years old I could barely walk, but MC here could kill wyverns with his bare hands. Very exciting story so far! The writing also exudes confidence and I love it~ I recommend this to fans of: overpowered MC reincarnation younger MC

It’s a lighthearted and highly enjoyable novel that keeps things fun and engaging throughout. The storytelling is smooth, making it an easy and entertaining read. The way amgice and races are implemented is nice, adding depth to the world while keeping things exciting. And, of course, having an overpowered main character makes it all the more thrilling, watching them grow and dominate challenges is always a treat!

Okay this is my review! World Building: I think this is an aspect that was his strength and pretty much well planned. By far it was okay and was well established. Pacing: It was slow but fine. Well tuned up and Narration was fun and funny sometimes. Writing quality: Grammar is fine but there are typos here and there. Needed to be rechecked as it destroys the flow. Also synopsis needs to be reworked. Strengths: Story, Plot, World building, Narration Weakness: Grammar, typos, Synopsis

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