Battle of Dominion
Story Summary:
In his world, Arthur was the strongest man alive, but despite his immense power, he faced the greatest crisis of his life: his only sister was on the verge of death due to a deadly illness. In a moment of despair, he met a powerful man, Daniel, who offered a solution to save his sister, but with a difficult condition. Arthur had to help Daniel with his own mission: to travel to another world, a world ravaged by wars and battles, where peace seemed almost impossible.
In this strange and war-torn world, Arthur faces enormous challenges from demons and dark forces that dominate the land. As time passes, he discovers that his mission is not just about saving his sister but also about bringing peace to a world torn apart by conflict and destruction. His fate intertwines with Daniel's, who leads him into battles not only for survival but also for the future, where each step brings him closer to answers and reveals ancient powers tied to the world he came from.
Will Arthur be able to achieve the peace he desires and fight the evil to save his sister? Or will fate lead him into a dark future with no way out?
A story filled with challenges, fierce battles, and powerful characters, where the hero faces a dark destiny in another world, fighting battle after battle.
It was a truly amazing experience. It presented us with feelings of sadness, despair, and hopelessness in a very wonderful way. It also showed us that even if you were the strongest, there will come a day when you will become helpless. It also showed us hope, that even if the whole world becomes narrow for you, relief will inevitably come. Therefore, it was an amazing experience that took us deep inside the human soul and the human mind. [img=In your face][img=faceslap][img=exp][img=disgusted][img=strong][img=recommend]
Very good, you have presented us with a really wonderful novel, and it was very knowledgeable and developed really wonderful characters. What distinguishes it most is the realism of the characters, unlike other novels where the hero is very strong and undefeated or his character is great and is not affected, and also secondary characters are the same thing.
A novel that gave me a wonderful journey, as it showed us moral values, human cruelty, interests, and the pressure that families cause their children in a strong way that destroys their psyche. This novel presented us with different feelings in a very thoughtful and wonderful way. I hope that you continue to work in the same way, and improve the quality of each chapter a little. 💖💖💖💖🔥✅
Whew. Where do I even start.. Oh well.. this novel has a lot of potential. But halfway through, there are some inconsistencies. A good edit can fix it in a jiffy! And if that's already done, then, this novel is good.. Pacing, character.. I even want to punch the head of the MC's mother.! Whew.. Anyways, add it on your collections! read and enjoy!
Your work is great! I'm hooked after reading the first chapter halfway but there still some things you need to improve on; 1)The usual grammatical errors here and there but overall you did good on this one 2)How you introduced 'Zila' into the story was too plain. I feel like you could've at least given some background information before revealing who she was. I guess that's your style but as fellow author I'd encourage you to do so. 3)How you let them speak in the first person pronoun. It's totally wrong to bring":" like that and it's not always you use he said or things like that. Let the conversation flow sometimes All in all, your doing great so keep up the good work co-author 👍