(Naruto, System, Forbidden Jutsu Collector, Stealing Tailed Beasts)
Kekkei Genkai: Transparent Escape = Peeping?
Jutsu: Flying Thunder God Technique = Stealing?
Seven-Tails Chōmei's Flight = Extra Convenience?
A young man from the Gekkō Clan awakens a system of misconduct, setting him on a path of mischief and mayhem throughout the ninja world.
On the battlefield, he’s like a phantom—appearing and vanishing without a trace. During the Fourth Shinobi World War, whether it’s Edo Tensei Madara or Obito, he doesn’t hesitate to strike from the shadows.
In everyday life, he’s a madman with a singular obsession: Stealing! He’s turned his stealing skills into an art form.
Hiruzen Sarutobi: “Kazuyama, you scoundrel! When did you secretly master this forbidden jutsu?!”
Jiraiya: “Half the material for Icha Icha Paradise came from Kazuyama Gekkō. And for that…”
*This is a Translation*
Original Title: 木叶老六,开局成为七尾人柱力
Original Author: 杠精萝卜头
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Chapter Release Rate: 1/Day (For now)
Would rate it higher but more and more of the story has devolved into "Hahaha, Thousand Years of Death!" butt poking. Even in the middle of life or death situations rather than actually handle the problems the MC will just poke guys in the butt.
It's been a very long time since i gave any story a review with 5 stars. This one made me laugh really hard. Mc's pranks are stupid and entertaining. So far there are no hints for a harem (yes, Pakura seems to be the only love interest so far) which is refreshing (even tho i prefer reading harem stories, here i don't mind at all). The only downside of mc's personality that i can think of is that he lacks a spine when it comes to self defense against angry girls, but i guess it's a part of comedy, so it didn't bother me that much. I can without any remorse recommend you reading it. I can't wait for a further chapters, so i'm already searching for a mtl version of it, unless it'll be unreadable since my dao in poison reading didn't reach yet lvl of grandmaster. Btw, it's really well translated. There's no china number one or any nationality superiority bs here, so you can read without any worries. Good job translator, keep it up.
it has some potential give it a try y'all might like it
This story get 5 BIG BOOMS FROM ME BOOM BOOM BOOM BOOM BOOOOM. Overall great story funny moments not boring very original...................
another great stuff from pinksnake🎉🎉... it's worth reading...try it.... author is this just one FL or not?
A nice story with zero logic. The start of the fanfic is done poorly with little to know logic or explanation. For instance, how long the MC has been with the system? Why is he so weak despite having so many OP jutsus? (8 Inner Gates, Flying Thunder God technique), if he is a transmigrator then why does he care about his little brother so much? Why does everyone think he is such a prodigy despite only being Chunin at 14? The only thing good in this fanfic is that the translation was done well. Anyway, I've read till chapter 10 and dropped it.
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Very good novel but be warned, I've read the raws and 580 chapters in, it's still around the time when Kumo tried to capture Hinata. Slow pace ff but the MC is likeable and there's still no signs of a harem.
This makes me genuinely laugh Love that fact that it doesn't take it too seriously
I can't stop laughing, The setup of the joke the punchline. Everything lines up perfectly.
The MC is likable and the story is good, just at the point i am in, in the story the Third Great Ninja War. Writing Quality : ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Updating Stability : ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Story Development : ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Character Design : ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ World Background : ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
The novel is very fun, the comedy is good, the translation was well done, but the protagonist's character construction was poorly done, the novel itself is very silly, it seems made for children, what's the fun about spying on women in bathrooms every time, don't you have money to go to a red light district? And these nosebleeds, things so absurd that they break the immersion, plus the canom characters don't act with the personalities they should. I've read 80 chapters and I'm dropping it, protagonist looks like a virgin child. Pure nonsense.
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En general me parece increíble, pero el protagonista utiliza en exceso el jutsu mil años de muerte como si fuera su única solución para resolver los problemas