In Supernatural as Brother Sam and Dean Winchester

not to sound like an a hole but this entire fic is pretty bad so far Grammer is bad formatting is atrocious length of chapters are too short story progression is bad and with what little character interaction it's pretty bad. best thing to help u if you are serious Abt this is look at other popular fics or ones u like and copy the format and pacing, the other issues should be easier to fix with proof reading

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