Ben 10: Carnitrix Without Downsides?
Short synopsis: Transmigrated into Ben 10, Zack gains the Carnitrix and a system—no side effects, pure power, and terrifying Alien forms!
Synopsis-
After transmigrating into the Ben 10 universe as Gwen’s adoptive cousin, Zack had one simple goal — enjoy the story from the sidelines.
But when Ben finds the Omnitrix… Zack finds something else.
He gets a System.
And that System gives him the Carnitrix — a powerful, unstable device that normally turns its users into evil monsters with no control.
Except Zack’s version? He just transforms into the evil versions of Ben's aliens but with—No side effects. No loss of control. No death!
Fight to evolve. Change the plot. Unlock new aliens.
And when he finally gets Alien X?
"I can use Alien X without arguing with the other two personalities? Hahaha! Fck yes!"*
So the main character, Zack, is apparently a cousin to Ben 10—possibly adopted by Gwendolyn’s parents? The details are a bit fuzzy there, but honestly, that’s not the heart of the story anyway. What is the heart? The unhinged brilliance of turning this into an action-comedy with a twist of cosmic horror. Let me just say—whoever came up with the Carnitrix mod was on something rare. That thing is basically a horror game strapped to your wrist on impossible mode. The second it's on, you can kiss free will goodbye. Transform into one of those “error aliens,” and you're just a passenger while the alien goes on a kill spree. It’s genuinely disturbing... and fascinating. The Ben who had to deal with that version of the Carnitrix in the fandom? Traumatized beyond sleep. Absolute nightmare fuel. I love that the author referenced that concept here while making this story its own beast. And I have to say—I really like that you didn’t give the Omnitrix to Gwen. It went to its rightful owner, and seeing Zack with the Carnitrix and Ben with the Omnitrix fighting side by side is such a cool dynamic. That duo brings balance: chaos and control, horror and heroism. Bonus points for not shoehorning in a love interest. These are kids. No one wants to see 10-year-olds fumbling around in a romance subplot. Thank you for keeping it clean and focused on fun, fights, and freakiness. Also—props for the body horror aesthetics. They hit hard. Creepy, visceral, but paired with comedic beats that keep the tone enjoyable rather than bleak. It’s a weirdly satisfying blend. Yes, sometimes the author gets a bit carried away in the writing... but honestly, that awkward enthusiasm is part of the charm. Once you know what you’re in for, it’s a wild and entertaining ride. Final Verdict: Solid 4.1/5 Fun, freaky, and way more original than you'd expect.
Buena historia con originalidad con el carnitrix y como involucran los personajes, escenarios, situaciones y el protagonista ............................................,..............................................................................................🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅
He gets strong way too fast. After defeating a couple drones then he was almost at Max level. Can't really speak on update stability because I just recently found eleven chapters. Character design is kinda mid as we don't even know how the main character looks like.
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I loved your story, please continue.......................................................................................................................................................................
Ben sanırım bu kitabı WTR-LAB 'da görmüştüm içeriği güzel olsada 10'uncu bölümde bırakmıştım çünkü Çince diyaloglar ve yazım yanlışları sinirimi bozmaya başlamıştı. Umarım bunu iyice çevirirsin 300 bölümü olması lazım başarilar diliyorum yazar😊
Nice work so far but i can't make a good review for the book with 12 chapters updated.....................................................................
What would happen if Kevin try to absorb the carnatrix? He’d probably turn into a crazy monster since he don’t got the mc’s system to protect his mind
Really good . The MC is a adopted kid by Gwen's parents. so we know where this is going. He gets aliens fast, like really fast. A little bit of Chinese elements but it doesn't effect the story. So it's a good story. Also can you give me the raw title.
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More please :) It's been great so far I hope more people read this so we can get more pictures of the aliens lol. :) Can't wait to see how to story goes. :)
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Fue buscar y ver qué alguien estaba haciendo una historia así, una gran satisfacción. Seguí hasta donde te sientas comodo pero espero que falte mucho para eso