Kazel was a powerful tyrant and a warrior in his world before he was reincarnated as a sickly boy in another world where one could cultivate with their souls.
This novel has promising and unique story. It make me reading until the last chapter.
I can't wait for next update.
Keep going for the next update.
a month ago
2
Shadowwarrior_007
It's a good concept. There are no grammatical errors.
I like the idea of being a tyrant or a general being in a cultivation, but I also hope the Mc isn't dumb, I've read books where the Mc is said to be some smart and experienced monster(not literally) but their action contradict it, I think writing such characters needs a lot of work as you have to think hard to make them smarter than you, so far i like the book, I see the potential.
but I hope the author doesn't fall into the trope of smart MC acting dumb, as this usually ends with the efforts of trying to make the Mc look or feel cool but ends up causing unnecessary conflict.
this is just my take on the trope, I do think you should read the story yourself and get a feel, Imo it is, and will remain so as long author's steers clear of those.
great job tho!!
a month ago
1
daniel_osaye
Wow! Avery interesting story that is well designed and good writing quality
This novel has promising and unique story. It make me reading until the last chapter. I can't wait for next update. Keep going for the next update.
It's a good concept. There are no grammatical errors. I like the idea of being a tyrant or a general being in a cultivation, but I also hope the Mc isn't dumb, I've read books where the Mc is said to be some smart and experienced monster(not literally) but their action contradict it, I think writing such characters needs a lot of work as you have to think hard to make them smarter than you, so far i like the book, I see the potential. but I hope the author doesn't fall into the trope of smart MC acting dumb, as this usually ends with the efforts of trying to make the Mc look or feel cool but ends up causing unnecessary conflict. this is just my take on the trope, I do think you should read the story yourself and get a feel, Imo it is, and will remain so as long author's steers clear of those. great job tho!!
Wow! Avery interesting story that is well designed and good writing quality