Path of Ashes
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Nevalis, a nobleman from the Kingdom of Phillirion, thought of nobles as the ones he read about in books. A noble title did not mean money or power, but rather had deeper, higher values symbolizing responsibility and honor, for those who lived with the saying "with power comes responsibility ".
But when Nevalis went out into the world, he did not find it as he had imagined. Reality hit him in the face.
Those bastards aren't nobles! Who do they think they are? They tarnished the noble title! They don't deserve that title anymore!"
"I will be a true nobleman, a nobleman of all the nobles who have passed this world!"
Nevalis seeks to truly redefine nobility, to fulfill his dream of becoming a true nobleman, more noble than all those who held the title before him.
The plot revolves around his personal journey, which brings a combination of suffering, sacrifices, and ascent towards his goal, in the face of a cruel world full of illusions and deviations.
The novel combines the profound lessons of honor and responsibility, and the challenges faced by humans in their quest for perfection.
"The descriptions in this novel are excellent, making the world feel alive and immersive. The pacing is good so far, and I’m curious to see how the plot and characters will develop. Keep up the great work, and don’t hesitate to experiment with different storytelling techniques!"
This novel stands out with its rich and detailed descriptions that bring the scenes to life. The writing style is captivating, and even though it's still in the early stages, I can already see great potential. Looking forward to more chapters
The beginning is very promising! The writing style is engaging, and the detailed descriptions make the scenes feel vivid and immersive. I'm excited to see how the story and characters will develop. Keep up the great work
The story's good, the writing also , especially the description. Please continue to be like this. I will give you my opinion on each chapter.
The novels are generally good at writing and describing. i Wait for the battle to begin and describe it as much fun as the seasons so far. i Just hope a regular download.
The beginning is good Keep looking for the development of the story and the hero character. The quality of the writing is plausible, and evolution is good. Please keep publishing the chapters regularly
The Description is perfect,go on like this.
This novel pulls you in from the first page and doesn’t let go. Every scene feels alive, every character is layered with real emotions, and every moment hits with intensity. The story takes you on a rollercoaster of emotions—one minute you’re smiling, the next you’re holding your breath. The twists are sharp, the pacing is perfect, and the dialogue is packed with energy and depth. The writing flows effortlessly, making it impossible to stop reading. This isn’t just a book; it’s an experience. One that stays with you long after you’ve turned the last page. thanks bro
The story begins with a calm and steady pace, allowing readers to ease into the world the author has created. The atmosphere is carefully crafted, and the attention to detail in the descriptions is remarkable. Every scene feels vivid, almost as if the reader is experiencing the surroundings firsthand. This level of description adds depth to the narrative, making the setting come alive and enhancing the overall experience. It’s refreshing to see an author take their time in building the world and characters, rather than rushing through the plot. The pacing allows for a more immersive and engaging journey, which I hope continues throughout the story. There’s a certain elegance in the way the narrative unfolds, and it promises great potential for the chapters to come. Overall, the beginning is promising, and I look forward to seeing how the story develops while maintaining this level of detail and calm
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Very good chapter 1 and the idea is actually good i will give chapter one 8/10