A lonely path, so endless, so wide,
Madness reigns on every side.
A mist that shrouds all faith and light,
Its claws now stretch through the endless night.
Oblivion calls, its voice a cry,
The dark whisper of a god, a fading lie.
The horror draws near, the shadows grow tall,
And silence spreads where none dare to call.
Oblivion calls, it takes its hold,
The mist dissolves, and all grows cold.
Follow a path born of hate and revenge,but what remains when vengeance ends? A hollow void, no peace to claim, yet Azrael escapes this fate through a mystery's flame. Could it be their deaths hide another goal?
Unveil the truth and seek the soul.
Here are a few notes about my story:
First, English is not my native language, so I have to rely on translators.
Second, what you can expect from my story:
The most important thing is probably the slow start. The first volume focuses on the development of my characters—why they act the way they do later and what their motivations are. There will be much more fighting in the later parts.
Additionally, the MC is more of a loner. The reasons for this will become clear in the first volume.
Third, what you shouldn’t expect:
An overpowered MC. The MC is definitely strong, but not invincible.
Also, don’t expect the MC to do everything on their own. There are other characters who are very important as well.
Books that have particularly inspired me: Lord of the Mysteries, Shadow Slave.
So then, let's begin with my own EXTREMELY OBJECTIVE analysis. Objectively speaking, my book is, of course, the best. No one will ever write a better one. Clear as day. Jokes aside, here's my assessment: Characters: Not bad, but far from good enough. The emotions are somewhat lacking, and a unique way of speaking would improve them. On the positive side, they have their own personalities and don’t just revolve around the MC. Worldbuilding: I’m proud of this. It becomes clearer as the story progresses—maybe in Volume 2 or 3. But I’ve put an incredible amount of effort into it. Story: It’s not bad, but it could have been developed a bit more. Overall, I think I’ve done a good job, but not a great one. There’s still a lot of room for improvement. By the way, it’s a rather slow-paced novel. If you have any questions, feel free to reach out to me!