From Hollywood to King of the World(Fanfiction)

I'm going to give it three stars. The story is cool, and the actor stars in two of my favorite movies, which helps. ^^ But frequent syntax and grammar issues regularly creep into the story, even if you get used to it, it's sad to have to force yourself to read sometimes. The MC already has some Chinese ego issues, as well as sentences that sound weird despite a translation that, I think, tries to iron out these flaws. So 2 would be too harsh, but 4 too kind for the quality. 3 is the highest rating.

Almost 10 chapters that are nothing more than a summary of the film with slight changes (not as good as the original). HORRIBLE. I like Zorro, but this is overdone. No other Hollywood story does that, and for good reason.

Best novel I have read in ages. Got well immersed. cannot wait to see where it goes. Breath of fresh air for me personally been drowned by ai novels lately. The only thing I can really say that's missing is the opposition got it with the face off ark but since then not many hurdles for the mc. The fanfic is interesting enough not to need it tbh but later chaps may become boring without the classic hero's struggles.

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