Marvel's New Magneto
After breaking free from the control of the God, a reincarnator arrives in the Marvel universe, determined to carve out a new life. However, his presence soon attracts attention from all sides.
S.H.I.E.L.D. Director Nick Fury is too stressed and left speechless, Tony Stark is already overthinking the existence of two Magnetos, and the X-Men’s Storm and Phoenix have issued a warning—"If you don’t have love, don’t bother us. Even the original Magneto himself is left speechless: "…I don't know..."
In a world filled with superheroes, villains, and cosmic threats, what kind of path will this new Magneto carve for himself?
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Since y'all are confused when reading to the next chapter I'll explain. Basically when a chapter ends think if it as a like a chapter in a video game story mode that ended and you are going to the next one. Each and every chapter tackles different topics and different scenes.
The same applies to this fanfiction as well every end of the chapter the scene ends and starts with a new scene. (Could be the same setting but different approaches/topics)
I hope this cleared up all confusion among readers (This is just my style so please bear with it) also please send Power Stones
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Currently at Chapter 72
Reveal Spoiler
El protagonista tiene los poderes del Magneto de las películas o del de los cómics?
i liked how the story started except the situation where eric woke naked in a man's room naked. that was so random. bit i kept reading, it was okay. and then theres tony stark at the park scene, i cant picture him being like that all flamboyant and stuff, im more use to him being the sarcastic but funny of a person he is. and hes just randomly in a park being cheesy about painting beauty or something, and then he laments hes old but no one even mentioned him being old, and i mean come on hes like in hes 30s or something in that time frame right?(correct me if i'm wrong). but then in chapter nine towrds the end of the chapter, it just like cut of a whole scenario. like when stryker and eric were just meeting for the first time, and then next thing you know strykers on the ground with a metal bracer oround hes neck out of breath. it didn't even mention how he got there, he just shouts how they got to know about him. i mean stryker's supposed to be cunning right? how can he shout the way they monitor the mutants in a fit of anger if hes supposed to be cunning? i mean hes a leader of a branch of hydra, and you dont get to be part of hydra if youre not smart enough to hold that position. and then it just cut's off to another scene to where the mutants comeback because they heard that stryker raided the x-mansion(they were fighting magneto when stryker attacked the mansion) and then it just cut's off AGAIN!!! to eric letting stryker go. and hes suppose to be a ruthless person(hes a reincarnator whos been fighting for a long time woth other reincartnator's in a strong eats the weak kind of world for a god). and then he says they find it hard to accept his decision. what desicion!? it didnt even mention anything about the aftermath of the fight it was just him staring at mystique as she smiles at him. and thats another thing, why is mystique in the x-mansion when she and magneto is supposed to be enemies with the x-men? i get it, she and the proffesor were friend's but shes at least going to be confined in ther right? i mean there enemies.
I rate myself 5 stars ofc. The writing quality of this fanfiction is better quality than my others tbh feel free to comment about issues/problems I'll try fix them as soon as I see it. Leave a rating also and thank you for the support. 🙏
bad and confusing..
first 3 chapters, good. Then it randomly skips time with no fcking information and got into sub-chinese level of story writing...
Since y'all are confused when reading ti the next chspter I'll explain. Basically when a chapter ends think if it as a like a chapter in a video game story mode that ended and you are going to the next one. Each and every chapter tackles different topics and different scenes. The same applies to this fanfiction as well every end of the chapter the scene ends and starts with a new scene. I hope this cleared up all confusion among readers's (This is just my style so please bear with it 😄)