Escanor(Marvel)

I welcome all my readers! In general, I wrote the first part of the book a year ago, meaning the first thirteen chapters were written a long time ago. I didn’t make any major edits and simply continued with minimal changes. A few clarifications for readers: 1)Escanor's powers originate from the X-gene, so there are no and cannot be any limitations to his abilities. It’s only a matter of time before his powers develop further. 2)I’ve seen comments about Storm. Let’s just say I tried to shape the character in a way similar to Merlin. Despite his strength, he is still young, and it's important to keep that in mind—he also lost his family. Storm treated him kindly. I’m not building any romantic relationships between them, just small hints at most. Overall, romance and similar dynamics won’t appear in the book for quite some time. 3)The X-Men arc is relatively short, but the overall plot is still heavily centered around the theme of mutants.

i would prefer if he remains enemy or hostile to x men and don't get attached to some girl in x men and become nerfed or attached or emotional so he forgives x men cause there are hardly few fanfiction where the mc doesn't want to become a hero and don't actually become one , it's real cringe or boring to see that same story line that mc is hostile to heroes then becomes one of them. especially if mc found someone to simp for.

Why did you make him 13-year-old? Negotiations with business partners, renting house... Who will even talk to a child about chat? Story itself is 2-3/5, not terrible, but just not interesting.

Picked escanor power Process to follow every order given to him😅

Escanor is the sin of pride. i think your mc would be suitable to be the sin of wrath. pride itself means control for escanor and the age is just a huge mistake. nobody with the right mind would take a 13 year old seriously.

Ain’t a horrible story, not at all—but man, this has one of those plots where someone who shouldn’t be so easily swayed just is, and it kills the whole vibe. It’s the same frustration as when every damn Marvel fanfic MC somehow ends up as the Ancient One’s disciple ‘cause she threatens to seal ‘em or some other lazy-ass plot device. Like, bro, you got all this power, all this potential, and you’re just rolling over? Nah, miss me with that. Same thing here—X-Men situation had the same issue. The setup had great potential, but the execution? Painful. Like, my head actually hurts from how avoidable this was. One tweak, a little more backbone in the writing, and this could’ve been fire. Instead, it’s just frustrating to read it all play out.

it has a lot of plot holes and I believe that the author doesn't even know how escanor power truly works it shows with his interaction with storm and scot laser eyes isn't literally laser it's a velocity blast or conclusive blast

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Me estoy arriesgando aquí, pero realmente llevaba mucho tiempo esperando un fic de Escanor en Marvel. Buena suerte autor, espero logres representar al león del orgullo como se lo merece.

A historia anda de um jeito que ninguém entende, as decisões do autor são uma loucura total! o Escanor é estupido o nível de ameaça dele é risível. O autor tem que dar uma gama de poderes e habilidades melhores para o escanor, é triste ver ele não usar nem 0,5% do seu poder direito.

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Still waiting for more chapters but from where its at its good..................................................................................................................

Por el momento es muy interesante. Aunque todavía es algo temprano para estar del todo seguro

It is very cool