being in prison for the crime that you never committed and the one behind your imprisonment is your brother in law and your girlfriend who used as their escape room after Killing your sister. you meet again after some years and they are married and they have a son. so you do your very best to come close to them inorder to get your revage and your main target to come close to them is their son whom later you was told is your son.
Bro. There are so many problems in your writing. I am just going to point them out for you. No hate. I know how hard it is to write and make up a story. *Suggestions 1. Use a writing format. (Ever heard of paragraphs. Ever heard of punctuations. Ever heard of dialogues.) 2. Make a cover image. (Use PixAi to generate images) 3. Write a better Synopsis. 4. Use proper Chapter Title. *Bad Stuff 1. Bad writing. 2. Bad format. (It's a Composition and not a story) 3. No punctuations. 4. No Dialogues. (You seem to have no understanding of writing. You most probably never wrote before (Properly).) (The way you write, can't provide you contract or fans) (As an contracted Author, I can recommend you to read my books (promoting), to have an insight, on how to write properly.) (Your plot is good, but writing quality is garbage)