Ch 12.A Beautiful Girl

Jit wiped the sweat off his forehead. He had been hunting monsters for hours, and exhaustion was finally catching up to him.

I should rest for a bit . I need to absorb some monster cores to regain Energy Points. After that fight with the Elite Wild Dog, I used up everything.

He reached into his storage and pulled out a monster core, its faint glow with energy. He activate his Super Absorbtion ability and start absorbing monster core.

[You are absorbing a Level 41 Monster Core...]

[+35 Energy Points]

[+44 Energy Points]

[+38 Energy Points]...

[You have completely absorbed the monster core.]

Jit exhaled deeply. Lower-level monster cores are absorbed instantly, he mused. But with higher-level cores, it takes longer... The higher the level of the core, the more time it takes to absorb.

Let's absorb more monster core 

[You are absorbing a Level 45 Monster Core...]

[+45 Energy Points]

[+54 Energy Points]

[+38 Energy Points]...

[You have completely absorbed the monster core.]...

After absorbing level 41 to 51 monster he open the status window to check how much energy point he have collected 

STATUS WINDOW

Name: Jit

Race: Human

Class: Warrior (Energy Master)

Level: 30 (EXP: 625/1950)

Health: 240/250

MP: 160/170

Attributes:

Strength: 150

Agility: 150

Defense: 101

Intelligence: 78

Luck: 55

Skill Points: 4

Free Attribute Points: 20

Energy Points: 1653

Abilites:

 Super Absorption(Rank SSS), Energy transfer(Rank SSS), Storage (rank D)

Skill:

Energy Slash(Rank C) , Energy Shield(Rank D)

Appraisal (Rank D), Energy Spear (Rank D)

So I have total 1653 energy poin. Let's change energy point into free attribute point.

 "Just as he tried to convert Energy Points into Free Attribute Points" a deep, guttural roar echoed through the forest, followed by a monstrous shriek. The ground beneath his feet trembled, as if something massive was moving. His heart pounded.

What the hell was that?

Curiosity and instinct clashed in his mind. It could be dangerous... but it could also be an opportunity. he sprinted toward the source of the sound.

After five minutes of running at full speed, he reached a small clearing and froze.

A massive, blood-covered bear stood at the center of a chaotic battle. Its fur was pitch-black, with streaks of crimson glowing along its body. Each step it took sent shockwaves through the ground. 

Surrounding the beast was a group of men in matching black outfits. They weren't just hunters. They looked like trained warriors.

And then he saw her.

Among the chaos, a young woman stood with an air of icy elegance. She was breathtaking, her long silver hair flowing behind her like strands of moonlight. Her blue eyes shimmered with an unnatural glow, and frost clung to the edges of her armor.

Jit's breath caught in his throat. Who… is she?

Before he could think further, she moved.

With a flick of her wrist, a blade of ice formed in her hand. She dashed toward the monstrous bear, her speed blinding. The way she moved it wasn't just combat; it was an art. Every swing of her sword, every step she took, was as graceful as a dance. The bear roared in pain as a streak of ice slashed across its body, freezing parts of its flesh.

Jit heart racing fast. She's incredible.

Jit active the apprisal skill to know her information. A translucent screen appeared before his eyes.

[STATUS WINDOW]

Name: Isha Segal

Race: Human

Age: 18

Class: Warrior (Ice Queen)

Level: 186

Health: 632/995

MP: 387/774

Attributes:

Strength: 303

Agility: 234

Defense: 265

Intelligence: 154

Luck: 59

Skill Points: 3

Free Attribute Points: 7

Abilities:

Ice Manipulation (Rank SS)

Dragon Eye (Rank A)

Skills:

Ice Rain (Rank C)

Ice Sword (Rank C)

...etc

Jit's eyes widened in disbelief.

Level 186?!

That was absurd. She was only 18! Most people struggled to reach Level 50 by her age, and yet, she was already stronger than most of the warriors in dalton city.

Trying to shake off his shock, he turned his Appraisal toward the men surrounding the bear.

Most of them ranged from Level 211 to 230, which was already terrifying. But when he tried to appraise an older man standing at the back

[Alert!]

[You cannot see the target's status.]

Jit stiffened. What?

Before he could process what that meant, the old man suddenly turned in his direction, his piercing gaze locking onto Jit's hiding spot.

Did he sense me?!

Jit's reflexes kicked in. He swiftly ducked behind a tree, barely breathing.

His instincts are sharp. Even from 200 meters away, he noticed me... He must be incredibly strong and possess some kind of detection skill.

Jit, still hidden behind the tree, turned his attention back to the battle. His curiosity burned just how powerful was that monstrous bear?

He activated Appraisal once more.

[Monster Status]

Name: Dark Bear (Rare Monster)

Level: 197

Health: 531/1539

Attributes:

Strength: 447

Agility: 84

Defense: 385

Intelligence: 78

Skills:

Sharp Claws (Rank B),Roar (Rank C)....

Jit's breath caught in his throat. A Level 197 monster… and with such insane strength and defense!

Despite its massive injuries, the bear was still a serious threat. He glanced at Isha again. She's already strong, but even she is struggling against it. And those men in black… Are they helping her or just watching?

Here's a refined and more engaging version of your passage:

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After 15 minutes of intense battle, the Dark Bear let out a furious roar and lunged at Isha with its massive claws.

But before the attack could land, a blur moved the old man.

With a single effortless motion, he blocked the bear's strike, his presence radiating overwhelming power.

Seizing the opportunity, Isha unleashed her final attack. Her ice sword glowed with a chilling aura as she dashed forward, slicing through the beast's thick hide.

The bear let out a painful roar, its massive body shuddering. Then, with a final agonized growl, it collapsed onto the ground before vanishing into thin air.

The battle was over.

Just as Jit thought it was finished, movement in the forest caught his attention.

A group of armed men emerged from the shadows, their eyes gleaming with greed. They rushed toward the battlefield, attempting to snatch the items dropped by the fallen monster.

Tension rose as the men in black confronted them. Harsh words were exchanged. Voices grew louder. Within moments, the argument exploded into violence the looters attacked first.

Big mistake.

Before Jit could even blink, the old man moved.

His sword flashed a blur of silver in the sunlight.

In an instant, the looters fell lifeless. Not a single scream escaped their lips.

Jit's body tensed as he watched. His heart pounded.

Who is that old man…?