Chapter 18: Be gentle... (R18)

She nodded, the flush on her cheeks deepening. "Nie Yong..."

Before Nie Yong could respond, Hu Mei'er closed the distance between them in one swift motion. Her hands gripped his shoulders, pulling him down as she stretched up on her tiptoes, her lips meeting his with a passion that matched his own.

This kiss was different. It was hungry, urgent, like they were both trying to make up for lost time. Nie Yong's hands found their way to her waist, pulling her closer as she melted against him. Their tongues danced, exploring each other with an intimacy that left them both breathless.

Nie Yong's hand moved down from her waist, sliding over the curve of her hip and down to her thigh. He couldn't help but admire the smoothness of her skin under his touch. He wanted to touch every inch of her, to make her feel the same desire that was burning through him.

Hu Mei'er moaned softly, the sound muffled against his lips. Nie Yong took that as a sign to continue, his hand moving further up her thigh, under the fabric of her dress. The warmth of her skin against his palm sent a jolt of electricity through him, and he could feel her trembling slightly under his touch.

She broke the kiss, her breath coming in short gasps. "Nie Yong…" she whispered, her voice husky with desire. "I've never… I've never felt this way before."

Nie Yong looked into her eyes, seeing the same hunger and confusion he felt reflected back at him. "Me neither," he admitted, his thumb tracing small circles on the sensitive skin of her inner thigh. "But I want you, Hu Mei'er. All of you."

Hu Mei'er shivered at his words, her resolve crumbling. She had always been the one in control, the seductress who held the strings. But here, in Nie Yong's arms, she felt herself losing control, and it was exhilarating.

"Then take me," she breathed, her fingers tangling in his hair as she pulled him back down to her lips.

Nie Yong didn't need to be told twice. He kissed her deeply, his hand moving up to caress the soft skin of her stomach. Hu Mei'er arched into his touch, her own hands exploring the hard planes of his chest.

The world around them faded away, leaving only the two of them lost in the intensity of their desire. Hate had turned into passion in such a short time.

Their clothes lay scattered around them, a testament to the urgency of their need. Nie Yong's lips trailed down Hu Mei'er's neck, leaving a path of fire in their wake. Her skin was like silk under his touch, and every sound she made only fueled the inferno burning inside him.

Hu Mei'er's hands roamed over Nie Yong's back, her nails leaving faint red lines as she tried to pull him closer, as if she wanted to merge their bodies into one. The heat of his skin against hers was addictive, and she couldn't get enough.

Nie Yong's lips found her breast, his tongue swirling around the hardened peak. Hu Mei'er gasped, her back arching off the ground as pleasure coursed through her. "Nie... Nie Yong," she breathed, her fingers tangled in his hair, urging him closer.

He obliged, his mouth moving to her other breast, giving it the same attention. His hand, meanwhile, slid down her stomach, fingertips teasing the sensitive skin of her inner thighs.

Hu Mei'er was lost in a sea of sensations. Every touch, every kiss, every breath Nie Yong took against her skin sent waves of pleasure through her. She had never felt like this - completely consumed by desire, her body and mind craving someone else's touch.

Nie Yong's fingers finally reached their destination, finding her already slick with desire. He groaned against her skin, the sound vibrating through her. "You're so wet," he murmured, his breath hot against her ear. "Is this all for me?"

Hu Mei'er could only nod, her ability to form words lost in the haze of pleasure. Nie Yong's fingers began to move, stroking and teasing, driving her wild with need. She writhed beneath him, her hips bucking up to meet his touch.

"Nie Yong," she panted, her hands gripping his shoulders tightly. "Please... I need you."

He looked up at her, his eyes dark with desire. "Are you sure?" he asked, his voice low and husky.

Hu Mei'er nodded frantically, her body aching for more. "Yes," she breathed. "I'm sure."

Nie Yong didn't hesitate. He positioned himself between her legs, his tip teasing her entrance. Hu Mei'er wrapped her legs around him, pulling him closer, urging him to take her.

"Be gentle," she whispered, a hint of vulnerability in her voice. "It's my first time."

Nie Yong's movements stilled for a moment, surprise flashing across his face. But then a soft smile replaced it. "Don't worry," he said gently. "It's my first time too."

With that, he slowly pushed forward, gasping at the tight heat that enveloped him. Hu Mei'er winced slightly, a sharp pain mixing with the pleasure. But as Nie Yong began to move, the pain faded, replaced by waves of bliss that washed over her.

They moved together in perfect harmony, their bodies speaking a language all their own. Every thrust, every touch, every whispered word brought them closer, binding their souls together in a way neither had ever experienced.

The forest around them echoed with their moans and gasps, the trees silent witnesses to their passionate union. Time lost all meaning as they lost themselves in each other, chasing the peak of their pleasure.

Nie Yong's pace quickened, his thrusts becoming deeper, more urgent. Hu Mei'er met him with equal fervor, her nails digging into his back as she clung to him. "Nie Yong," she cried out, her voice a mix of his name and a plea for more.

"I'm here," he gasped, his lips capturing hers in a searing kiss. "I've got you."

The tension built until it became unbearable. Nie Yong reached between them, his fingers finding that sensitive spot, rubbing in quick circles. Hu Mei'er's eyes widened, her breath catching in her throat.

"Nie Yong... I'm..."

He kissed her again, swallowing her cries as they both reached the peak. Waves of pleasure washed over them, their bodies trembling with the force of their release. Nie Yong buried his face in the crook of Hu Mei'er's neck, his breath hot against her skin as they both rode out the aftershocks.

For a long moment, they lay there, tangled in each other's arms, their hearts beating as one. The only sound was their heavy breathing, slowly returning to normal.

Finally, Nie Yong lifted his head, looking down at Hu Mei'er with a soft expression. "Are you okay?" he asked gently, brushing a strand of hair from her face.

Hu Mei'er smiled up at him, her eyes shining with unshed tears. "I've never been better," she replied, her voice filled with wonder.

Nie Yong chuckled softly, leaning down to place a gentle kiss on her forehead. "Me neither."

They lay there for a while longer, basking in the afterglow. Nie Yong had never felt such a deep connection with anyone before. It was as if their souls had recognized each other, finally finding their missing piece.

As the reality of what they had done began to sink in, a wave of panic washed over Hu Mei'er. She had given her virginity to a man she had just met, a man who had initially angered her so much. But looking into Nie Yong's eyes now, she couldn't find a single regret in her heart.

Nie Yong, sensing her unease, tightened his arms around her. "What's wrong?" he asked softly.

"Do you want to join the Blood Battle Sect?" she asked, her eyes looking into his.

Nie Yong blinked. "The Blood Battle Sect? No way I'm joining that Sect full of egocentric bastard—"

Hu Mei'er cutely pouted. "Look who's talking..."

Nie Yong chuckled. "Hey, I was just trying my best to pull you. I'm not like that, usually." He smiled, his expression turning playful. "But it seems like being myself worked, right?"

Hu Mei'er couldn't help but laugh at his cocky attitude. "I guess it did."

Nie Yong thought, 'Thanks for your advice, Mom.'

"Are you sure you don't want to join us? We're way better than the High Heaven Sect, and if you come with us, our relationship could be smoothe—"

He got up, putting on his pants. "Relationship? Aren't we rushing things a bit too much?" he said.

Hu Mei'er, who was also dressing up, looked at Nie Yong in shock. "W-What? I-I've already given you my purity!" she said. "We can't rush things more than this!"

Nie Yong chuckled as he finished dressing himself. "I know," he said with a playful smile. "I was just joking, Mei'er."

"Mei'er?" she stammered. He was already calling her that closely?

"Why?" Nie Yong said with a raised eyebrow as he tossed her clothes to her. "Can't I call you Mei'er?"

Hu Mei'er started dressing herself. "N-No," she said. "It's fine… I like it… Can I call you Yong'er then?" she asked, now fully dressed.

"Yes," Nie Yong said as he gave her a quick kiss on the lips. "And don't worry about me being part of a different sect… If your sect complains, I'll just crash them."

Hu Mei'er couldn't help but smile. "So it wasn't just an act before?" she said. "You are really arrogant."

To be continued...

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How was this chapter? Does Nie Yong and Hu Mei'er's relationship seem more natural than the original fanfic?