Harry Potter : This Progress Too Much

Harry Potter : This Progress Too Much

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Author: Elara_Thorn
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Traveling through the world of Harry Potter, on the day he received his admission letter, David awakened the Achievement System. As long as he completed certain milestones, he would receive corresponding rewards.



With three million gold Galleons, he unlocked the achievement: [Wealthy Enough to Rival a Country].



By obtaining the blood of magical creatures, he achieved: [I Am No Longer a Human Being].



After casting Avada Kedavra on a hundred wizards, he earned: [Big Melon Lover].







On graduation day, as David seamlessly took over as Minister of Magic, a reporter from The Daily Prophet eagerly asked:



"Mr. Adrian, as the youngest and most accomplished Minister of Magic in history, you became famous at Hogwarts within a year, won the Order of Merlin in just two years, and defeated a professor outright by your third year. What is the secret behind your extraordinary success?"



David spread his hands and said with a smile:



"I just really wanted to improve!"

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Drakiros
Drakiros

As I'm writing this review, I'm currently in chapter 21 . Honestly, it seems so far a good read. The world is HP, so the author builds upon what's already established, bringing new creatures, I believe, and some side notes on the dark side of his HP world, the writing is good but in two chapters specially important chapters for the story the Wand and House choosing chapters it's like there are two authors and the first one seems to be the brain behind the story makes his whole wand chapter with a type of wand and the second author comes with a new wand chapter and a whole different wand , altough on the house chapter they both end with the same house they are both written so differently that it becomes a bother to read again, but that's is my take so far I don't know if it happens again yet but go ahead and read and see for yourself

19 days ago
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exgarex_123
exgarex_123

Aparte del Sistema simple y sencillo. Tengo un problema con la cronología ya que no se que tan lejos esta de la Escena del Troll de Halloween. Quitando eso, puedo decir que esta bastante relajante de Leer

8 days ago
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