AI slop, without a hint of creativity and no structure, it shouldn't exist along with the other abominations of AI written sh*t that these ret@rds call fanfictions.
a month ago
24
AkiraLight
I don’t wish to be rude but the chapters are overly repetitive, they don’t progress in a structured formate and keep reiterating the same points over and over again. The idea is good but the execution falls short, there’s countless contradictions and plot holes in the story and non are addressed. The plot changes constantl, the chapters are not built up from one another, it feels fractured.
a month ago
7
Raymond_McKoin
Best stuff I have read in a long time please keep updating
Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee
a month ago
2
Hiro_P
Uma FanFiction muito boa gostei bastante da história e do desenvolvimento do personagem foi um pouco rápido mas foi agradável não teve muita enrolação na história como alguns altores que levam 50 capítulos pra fazer o personagem ir de nível 1 ao nível 2, gostaria muito que vc não desista obrigado pela história sei que é difícil escrever uma história assim afinal se você fácil eu fazia eu mesmo o que não é o caso não tenho talento para escrever só pra ler mesmo kkkk
2 days ago
0
MorTemTK
I’ll be honest, it’s not that good, a really interesting idea, it actually gave me inspiration for something similar, but the story is basically a diary, and the way it’s written is like a summary of events rather than a story that unfolds as you read it.
9 days ago
0
FlipperTrout164
Really good story would be cool if he awakened again and got even stronger but im not gonna tell you ou how you should write your story just keep up the good work. Havent read something this good in a while love how its not just focused on jinwoo but other characters i read somehing like it but not really its about a hunter in america but the author doesnt post anymore so happy that this one updates frequently. Keep up the good job.
a month ago
0
masbroindo
This is good solo levelling fanfic. I give five stars for author!
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AI slop, without a hint of creativity and no structure, it shouldn't exist along with the other abominations of AI written sh*t that these ret@rds call fanfictions.
I don’t wish to be rude but the chapters are overly repetitive, they don’t progress in a structured formate and keep reiterating the same points over and over again. The idea is good but the execution falls short, there’s countless contradictions and plot holes in the story and non are addressed. The plot changes constantl, the chapters are not built up from one another, it feels fractured.
Best stuff I have read in a long time please keep updating Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee
Uma FanFiction muito boa gostei bastante da história e do desenvolvimento do personagem foi um pouco rápido mas foi agradável não teve muita enrolação na história como alguns altores que levam 50 capítulos pra fazer o personagem ir de nível 1 ao nível 2, gostaria muito que vc não desista obrigado pela história sei que é difícil escrever uma história assim afinal se você fácil eu fazia eu mesmo o que não é o caso não tenho talento para escrever só pra ler mesmo kkkk
I’ll be honest, it’s not that good, a really interesting idea, it actually gave me inspiration for something similar, but the story is basically a diary, and the way it’s written is like a summary of events rather than a story that unfolds as you read it.
Really good story would be cool if he awakened again and got even stronger but im not gonna tell you ou how you should write your story just keep up the good work. Havent read something this good in a while love how its not just focused on jinwoo but other characters i read somehing like it but not really its about a hunter in america but the author doesnt post anymore so happy that this one updates frequently. Keep up the good job.
This is good solo levelling fanfic. I give five stars for author! ............................................................................................................................................................................
I Like It !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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