The Body of Hate

The descriptions are super vivid in a way you can picture the scene in your head. The relationships between characters are well established by the way they speak to each other. The dialogue flows really well too, i’m excited to read more!!

im genuinely excited for the next chapters. I love the way the story is heading and can't wait for what's next

Absolute peak. blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah

I loved the chapter but right now the protag just reminds me of every basic protag, I'm not saying that's a bad thing, Personally I think it would be cool to have a more original/backstory of the character to start with. don't get me wrong I loved the part where he dreams about the blue glow but I'm just not getting it. I guess I'll just have to wait for the next chapter. Overall though it's not a bad story at all I think I need more story line for it to grow on me though.

Reveal Spoiler

its really good i like the general idea the characters are hella cool and its fire the only reason its 4 stars is cuz theres no updates the story isnt nearly finished and there is basically no background

I personally liked this first chapter a lot. It reminded me a bit of some of my favorite manga and anime.

I look forward to the next chapters, envy.