As the Hulk in Danny Phantom/DC/Young Justice
Author: Samael_Son_of_Dawn
4.1
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Seriously mom, dad! Which of you was stupid enough to put the ON button in fucking side!
Oh, who am I kidding, it was probably dad...
Man... I just died... For the second freaking time!
At least I now remember it though, my previous life that is.
Though, I may become Jazz's favorite pet project soon, since teaching her younger brother how to anger manage, is most definitely going to be one of her favorite past times.
I just got to remember not to Hulk the fuck out, when the next paper cut happens.
My life man, good God.
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one star for writing quality because its an AI story! Same with story development. all AI stories are crap and should be banned. they are a waste of space and ruin the efforts of real authors who put in work to write a story.
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This is legit one one the best fanfic written. Everything checks out with their exact show counterparts. There is no problem with grammar so far the only problem would be not having enough chapters. The author deserves every praise for this also I have message for everyone why don't we kidnap the author and make him produce chapters day in and day out for us I mean this is the best plan created since Sliced bread
Okay dude, what the fuck are you on. You can't just make me save 2 of your stories in the same week. I haven't come across a good Danny Phantom story in so long. Keep up the great work!
Es una buena historia. A mi me aburrió, pero acepto que es una historia más que decente y bastante bien manejada para la extraña combinación de mundos
Honestly, I typically don't write reviews, but I feel that this one needed one more out of spite due to some people believing that just because a story is written using AI, that automatically makes it bad. If it weren't for the Author literally stating that they are using AI as a tool, I would not have noticed anything. With that being said, his story has a lot of potential, the direction of the story is great, and while not the most refined and well thought out story, I still find quite enjoyable. The story is good as is, though it could be better, like fleshing out the time skips, as there is no real time scaling that I could see. One moment the MC got his powers, the next he battled a number of enemies, next a month has past and he somehow battle/interacted with so many ghosts that he no longer finds much surprise. I thought the integration of DC with Danny Phantom could be better, but for the most part is fine. At the time of this review I have read 32 chapters, though two I think where more notes then chapters, and I think the timeline/characters could have been more fleshed out, probably adding another 20-30 chapters in doing so, or just more word count on existing chapters. The abrupt power scaling may harm the story in the future, so it is something to look out for. Nevertheless, I do find myself excited for following chapters and hope for the best.
Good Writing is decent (definitely not AI that's for sure) Stable updates usually daily Story is progressing nicely Character designs need a bit of work (just a bit of tinkering otherwise solid) Everyone knows DC so world background is irrelevant A slight nitpick is that some arcs or development (just two) felt contrived. It isn't a major contrivance that screams glaringly at you but if you give some thought about it you can see it.
This is the second best Danny Phantom/DC that I have read on Webnovel. This story is very well written and interesting. Thank you for taking your time to write this amazing story for us.
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