Reborn in Konoha; I Think I’m Cultivating Immortality

Really love the cheat that the MC gets in this story, I always love Naruto fics with cultivation. Unfortunately the writing quality is poor and story is just bad. MC is arrogant, obnoxious, and too stupid to survive a few days without plot armor. Lot of wasted potential here

Story seems good, no harem and it seems pretty interesting and the translation is really good

i hate cultivation(qi) and swords(sword aura) based stories... it's just too simple and predictable...

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its very good no harem.......would recommend

I know it's a translation, but it's very annoying having to read full names all the time, especially the mc. Reduce it to just Hui please, I think it's possible to do that in translation. The story itself is a little poor, with an excess of praise for the MC's appearance, there is also the fact that 6-year-old girls make declarations of love and seek relationships, which is quite silly and unrealistic, at most there could be admiration juvenile (that's what we expect from many Chinese authors and their strange fetishes). I'm still at the beginning of the story. Regarding cultivation with different powers, I don't see a problem, as long as it is well planned and doesn't make the mc too op immediately and of course an idiot. And I hope the other ninjas aren't portrayed as idiots where only the MC can do something (there's a lot of Chinese history that you can't follow because of this).

SIGH..... the translation is fine . the story itself is GARBAGE. no matter how i tried to think otherwise . Chinese novel.. what else can i say??

the translation and original work are written excellently. background is 5/5 cause its naruto the character are nice and some are original. the story development tho has left alot to be desired. the character is very shallow guy with protect my comrades mentality and no original thoughts. just goes with the flow. the kid romance is very jarring to read as I don't really like to read about two kids mooching or hugging or flirting tbh. esp when the main character is an adult mind transmigrator. honestly its just ew. and the glazing in the chapter is insane. sometimes the glazing of background character could take 4-5 chapters. after he got some fame every move he does background npcs must glaze him for 2 paragraphs minimum. its really annoying and makes me skip chapters. overall 3.5/5

Really good translation. Liked the premise and hoped it delves into village management after he becomes Hokage. Full Raw name?

currently around chapter 60, the story is going in a good direction for me, I especially like how the author has developed the character of mc and how side characters feel real aswell especially is squadmates.

it was going fine Mc getting stronger the World building was also fine but as soon as you started Uzumaki Clan Arc i felt disappointed really did you not watch Naruto Uzumaki clan were so powerful that almost all the major villages took to destroy them including the Konoha and then here you just make them fodder really

Don't know if the translator made a mistake, but the so-called author in the description is not the real author. The real author is: 余青衣.

The story was great, no harem only tsunade this is honestly one of the best naruto fanfic out there if you could look past the chinese influence its a great read.

I think that if it weren't for the repetitive comments that are obviously there to reach the word quota per chapter and unnecessary comments that are there for the same reason, this would be a good story. I keep skipping the story and that ruins the immersion, not to mention... Never mind, read whoever wants to.