Inside Abyss
WSA 2025 ENTRY #WSA2025
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Broken and shattered into a million pieces, Stark found all the memories of his past self forgotten, gone, swallowed by the Abyss.
He opened his eyes to a world draped in shadows, where whispers wove through the air like unseen phantoms, and sorcery pulsed beneath the surface. Esoterica and Grimoire. Palimpsest and forbidden knowledge.
With each step forward, he sought the truth of his existence—who he was, who he had been.
But should he have knocked on the locked doors of Resonance… or surrendered himself to the quiet embrace of forgetfulness?
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Hey everyone! This is my first novel, so I’m still learning as I go. You might notice some inconsistencies, grammatical mistakes, or pacing issues in the early chapters, but I promise I’ll improve as I write more.
I have a lot planned for this story, so I hope you’ll look forward to it—but maybe not too much, I don't know ; )
That said, if anything feels off or could be better, please let me know! I’m still an amateur, and your feedback will help me grow.
Thanks for giving my story a chance!
Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.
well I'll be damned the abbys isn't just for show after all, with the first chapter you got fans hooked and tbh i wanna see more
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Honestly, this story is really good and has great appeal, of course the potential, you know your writing is very very neat, I'm not lying, it's really neat, until I really understand what is written there, keep fighting! I will read the next chapters on another occasion.
it has nice descriptive writings but the pacing slow.i hope it will be alright in the future... ...................................................................................... keep up the good work
So, I’m on Chapter 4, and I just have to say that when it comes to writing descriptions and certain scenes, this book is good. However, in terms of storyline and pacing, I find myself a bit confused. Like, did Stark wake up in another world, time, or place? Did he transmigrate in Chapter 1, or was it just a dream before he ended up in the circus? That’s my only concern, but overall, I’m enjoying the mystery of the story, the characters in the circus, and the journey!
Keep going.....good story and good chapter 1❤️
The world of mysteries and magical unfoldings, reflecfing with basic and raw human emotions in the continuous quest of one's true self. Great story 👍
hm...I will waiting till it reach at least 50-75. good luck!