Douluo: The Celestial Book

Buenas una pregunta esta historia es una traducción o es una historia original por qué de ser la segunda tenía una duda y si en los próximos capítulos haces mención sobre técnicas del mundo de naruto o de fma en si con las técnicas de control de chacra sería útil para crear movimientos personales además de que también podrías sacar métodos de entrenamiento de dragón ball usando el método de roshi o otra opción que puedes sacar seria el manejo de nen que es una energía con mucha versatilidad y lleva a un entrenamiento más personal no sé qué opinas de eso Good question this story is a translation or is it an original story because of being the second I had a doubt and if in the next chapters you mention techniques from the world of Naruto or fma itself with the chakra control techniques it would be useful to create personal movements in addition to the fact that you could also take dragon ball training methods using the roshi method or another option that you can take out would be the handling of nen which is an energy with a lot of versatility and leads to a more personal training I don't know what you think of that

why is his name Japanese?. -1 star. why does the main character speak his thoughts out loud?. - 1 star. Why is he so dumb?. - 1 star. why does the main character ignore the fact that he was literally a genius in his previous life?. - 1 star.

Sabes una pregunta que me he estado haciendo es si más adelante revelarás datos del futuro como por ejemplo el estado de las sectas tang y de la de rongrong para que estas empiecen a ver la realidad de si aún deben seguir con sus planes de tener a tang san de aliado o enemigo en el futuro además de usar esta idea para los maestros espirituales de soporte usando los métodos de nasuverse usando el estilo de pelea de rin tosahka usando gemas cargándolas con energía o en este caso elementos similares a la maldición gard otra idea que puedes explotar sería el refuerzo que técnicamente aún se puede implementar con los estilos de combate por no decir otra alternativa que puedes usar para potencial de combate a futuro sería sincronizar el poder espiritual con la semilla de ah yin para que ella entre en tu espacio espiritual y obtener de manera artificial una segunda alma marcial tomando el emperador azul plateado que opinas You know a question that I have been asking myself is if later you will reveal data from the future such as the state of the tang and rongrong sects so that they begin to see the reality of whether they should still continue with their plans to have tang san as an ally or enemy in the future in addition to using this idea for the spiritual masters of support using the methods of nasuverse using the fighting style of rin tosahka using gems loading them with energy or in this case elements similar to the curse gard another idea that you can exploit would be the reinforcement that technically can still be implemented with the combat styles not to say another alternative that you can use for future combat potential would be to synchronize the spiritual power with the seed of ah yin so that it enters your spiritual space and obtains artificially a second martial soul taking the silver blue emperor what do you think

I would say the story is going well. the only problem is updates. u have to post more, man because there is a feeling of discontinuity at the end of the chapters, but the work is very good for now

It has good development, need more time to cook, MC going to have harem, need more of development female characters pls don't be like Pokémon he need to catch thim all. MC give a feeling of douch bag hope i am worng in latter character