Crazy immortal

A funny story at the very beginning of the journey. It is dynamic and easy to read. The characters are alive - there are no cliched characters who were introduced just to be. In a short 10 chapters, the author managed to touch me and now I'm looking forward to updates!👍🏻

This is my book, and I can't give it less than 5 stars. I hope you'll appreciate it too. In this book, I have tried to make everything as concise as possible, alternating moments of suffering with sensual episodes. Several times I found myself laughing or crying.

The story is an interesting read. At first I thought there would be action, but in the end I got a cool story about MC’s mom in the lead role. Katerina is the best character in the work. I read only for her sake. It’s well written, although it’s clear that it’s not written by a native speaker

An honest review from a fellow author. The Word building in the first ten chapters is enough to give the novel a solid foundation as they include ample clues about the setting being based around Roman mythology and martial cultivation with a strong revenge theme laying the groundwork for a villainous MC's rise to power. Evidence suggests that you're writing in Russian and translating to English either personality or with AI assistance. Part of chapter 4 is in Russian, and the mother's name switched languages once or twice. Careful with using AI tools, could affect contract considerations. Still rather readable overall. Translator for Super Gene 2 can't even keep genders straight. The premise is solid and I look forward to seeing where you take the story and how you flesh in the cultivation system as you mix Roman mythos with Chinese cultivation elements. +1 on the cat girl maid. The descriptions are good but could be a little less wordy at times. Paragraph length and spacing could use improvements. (To fit better with WN/LN style and platform) Ie. Mobile friendly. As that is how most readers access the platform. Still not that bad as is.