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I thought I had seen bad endings before—but nothing prepared me for the garbage conclusion of The Hero’s Path.
Years of investment, countless struggles, and for what? The protagonist failed. The villain won. Everyone else? Dead. Furious, I sent a message to the author, only to get a chilling response:
[Do you think you could do better?]
Before I could even blink, my phone exploded in a blinding light, and the next thing I knew—I was waking up in a completely different body.
Now, I’m Merlin Everhart, a fourteen-year-old with a 12-star talent, the kind of gift only the strongest should have.
But here’s the problem: I have no idea who I am supposed to be.
With nothing but a system and a first-day-of-school alarm ringing in my ears, I’m thrown into the world of The Hero’s Path.
Am I just another side character in a world that already ended once?
…Either way, I refuse to let this story beat me too.
Hey everyone, author here. (Short information, Q&A if you have questions please ask here.) 1. First and foremost this is not a harem novel. 2. This is not smut or anything of the sort. 3. Yes there will be romance included slightly. But it’s not the novel’s main focus. Chapters will be (either 2 1k word chapters a day, or 1 1.5k word chapter.) If you have any questions please do ask here. Thank you all for reading. Your dear author, BeMyMoon
这本小说的封面真是令人叹为观止，细节与艺术完美融合。封面上的持剑男子是最引人注目的焦点，他那长长的黑发随意绑成马尾，散发着一种不拘一格的优雅感。他那双金色的眼睛，如同午夜星空中闪烁的星辰，散发着一种异乎寻常的力量，令人瞬间被吸引。手中的长剑锋利而威严，增添了他英勇的气质。每一处细节都预示着一段精彩的故事，让人迫不及待地想要翻开书页，探索其中的冒险。
5/5 stars just for the cover 🔥Holy shit the cover is PEAK FR I think I'm climaxing
the vibe of this novel is awesome. i think this novel is going to be a big hit.
This novel is good , I think it will be a hit. It would be great if there are more chapters.
Too much fighting/training for me. Honestly, it would be a much better read if the MC had more interactions with the main cast or the original MC of the novel instead of just the teachers. Even with them, his interactions are too focused on training. It feels like you're trying to make him a killing machine whose only goal is to kill the final boss and save the world 🌍. While that goal is fine, it's not enough on its own. His life shouldn't revolve around fighting and improving himself to kill someone who appears at the very end of the novel.{he needs proper character development in this aspect.} Also, the fact that the MC can learn anything at a glance makes him a bit boring for me. Lastly, I think the story would improve if the MC formed deeper bonds with other characters while reducing the number of training chapters. I hope you find my review helpful.
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peak novel fr , plot and story is something u never seen before with characters who has actual brain and give castle for hot girls all this for something i didn't even read
the novel isn’t bad at all if you like really overpowered mcs then you’ll like it but the way he gets his power ups doesn’t really even make sense and he jus gets them for the sake of the story. Besides that the story is alright it’s pretty cliche but we don’t get any world background or anything about the power system at all. The characters are also really one dimensional. Personally i think it jus needs more time in the oven
good novel. keep it up. I especially like the character of mc and the surrounding theme
Haven't read yet the synopsis is a catch, it's seems interesting and I can't wait for more chapters to binge watch. let's goooo!
great novel right here... mc is an arrogant beach but has the balls to make up for it... also i thought of reducing the rating cause u changed the stickman cover but it's unfair to a good novel...
I MUST SAY YOU OUT DONE YOURSELF MAN Elf princes was good but this is on another level Now it is one of the best novels i have read so far .
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Impressed. I believe your work has great potential and I’d love to help showcase it through story art animation and i can also help you to reach a wider audience . Additionally, do you have other social media accounts where I can connect with you? You can find me on Instagram and discord :@book_blaze.