Peter Parker

if you guys want, I can create chapters to your liking. just comment here and I will make it a chapter.

I could only read up to chapter six. We don't know what year the story takes place, if there are other heroes, what exactly the world is like and the MC doesn't care or is curious to know, the AI ​​writing is noticeable but it's not bad, but the MC is, A cowardly Peter, even with powers he doesn't have the courage to face Flash Tompson head on, and he's a thief too... I like stories where Peter isn't nice and boring, but this Peter is simply a coward.

I am thoroughly surprised by the contents of this Fan Fic. It’s really good in everyway and I actually have nothing to complain about. And I complain a lot if there’s something to complain about, and there usually is for Fan Fictions. I’m mostly surprised no one rated this Fic yet, but anyway, 5 stars overall.

One of the best spiderman story and I liked it because it's slow paced unlike most story where the hero keeps fighting one villain after another and this spiderman is cautious and keeps hs own needs as foremost. I really liked it waiting for more chapters

i know this is a slow paced generic plot book but I don't know the reason but I really like it

Great fic.. found gold. chp 40. At the moment, a great MC. Not a forever forgiving idiot.

On the one hand it's not so bad, on the other hand there's very little information and details about the world and what's happening, everything is generally pretty bland.. I don't like MC at all, his character and what he is is unknown, who he was before the resettlement is also unknown, but he behaves like a sociopath.. cold-blooded beating Flash in the dark, and then walking around with a satisfied grin when alone, and putting on a sympathetic mask in front of others, it's disgusting.. his motivation for anything is also incomprehensible.. I'm only for original works and I rate them more gently than shitty Chinese translations that bots inflate ratings, but I think that criticism should be fair, and here by an objective assessment, and not 1 or 5, somewhere around 3.5-4

minor mistakes here and there like saying he has organic webs then saying he needs space to make web fluid . but other than that solid story and pacing , not your typical happy go lucky hero save everyone at all times . id say hes more neutral and leaning towards hero side , but steals only from gangsters and kills sometimes which i dont have issues with , solid 8/10

Bro this is a really fun story to read man. But I see that there aren’t much views. Maybe change the cover photo to a love interest or something? That would get you a lot of clicks and maybe add some more tags will pop up more then and change the title to something generic but interesting but these are all suggestions cause this is your story to write and you are doing a great jot with it. Though is there a fixed schedule for the uploads?

Man I loving this story. MC is believable smart & strong with some character flaws. Spoiler . . . . . . . I love the way two peter interact and also here is MC's priority in the date with Liz scene.

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