10,000x Cultivation: I Gain Power by Adopting Training Acolytes
Journey through the world of immortal cultivation to become an elder, the opening to obtain a pair of immortal master heavenly eyes, one look will be able to see through the countless disciples qualifications and defects; accepted disciples of the holy order qualification disciples, to obtain 10,000 times the return of the physical body, disciples cultivation the stronger I am. Since then, Zhang Yun has opened a way to accept disciples and cultivate disciples .......
"You cultivate your disciples' cultivation as a breakthrough from the Qi Refining Stage, achieving a hundred times the return of the physical body, you break through to the peak of the Foundation Establishment Stage!"
"You cultivate your disciple's cultivation as a breakthrough from the Foundation Establishing Stage, achieve a thousandfold increase in body mass, and break through to the peak of the Jindan Stage!
"You cultivate your disciple's cultivation to the point of breaking through from the Jindan Stage and receive ten thousand times the return, and you break through to the peak of the YuanYing Stage!"
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