Void Evolution System

Yo, I am Crocs, and this is my first time trying my hand in writing novels. There are definitely shortcomings, but I’m learning more as I continue to write the story. Hope you guys enjoy it!

As the TRUE first official reader of Crocs' book, I knew it could do well and I still think so. This story has some similarities with the books many are aware of, but not in any means, is same. Crocs has put his own uniqueness in the book and it shows in marvelous ways, and it always keep you on the edge of your seat. Go read, won't disappoint, cheers.

This book honestly had so much potential however it was a complete letdown, MC casually getting needed and buffed randomly to the point where his true strength has little meaning, kind of forced relationships , MC is meant to have amazing talent and be an evolved st the same time however the girl on earth casually ahead of him while having healing abilities compared to him who slaughtered thousands and is living in a dungeon , pink haired girl casually trusting a random stranger when they first met , even going out of her way to make him escort her with a random guess he hadn't registered as am adventurer which is pretty stupid considering his strength is pretty high and she had no way of knowing that he's an otherworlder and even when he released bloodlust on her she brushed it off when she has assassins on her . Novel started off great and had amazing potential imo but just crumbled

Here is the authentic review from the beta reader of this novel! Writing Quality: Bruh, its the first book but as a native author, he has good grasp of writing. You can rarely find any mistake. The words are simple but well structured. Stability: Haha, *nervous chukcle* you are in for a good deal with the author. You can expect perfect stable updates hehe. Story development: Everything is well planned. Things that need more screentime are shown appropriately and if its useless filler scene, he makes sure to cut them. A solid 5/5. Character: MC is a likable and relatable character. All the Fls are well designed and put thought into. H.a.r.e.m is also well written showing perfect balance among the tension, drama and sweet moments. World: 5/5. Its a fantasy world but everything makes sense. Its well planned. i hope author makes a map of the worlds tho haha. Also Cover: Its one of the FL in the cover (reference art). It's nice and well, I love it. Conclusion: Dont skip over. Give it a try and I m sure it will hook you enough to continue reading XD.

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If you want to read solo leveling again you may enjoy this book. Overall there is way too much copy paste storyline from other novels, and the speed at which the MC grows is way too fast for absolutely no reason. Besides the grammar which seems solid this is probably the most poorly written story I’ve read on here so far. I think the abilities are cool but the MC just goes from 6 years of being a waste to the most talented warrior imaginable just because he gets caught in a dungeon. Not to mention he is suddenly a sword master after swinging his sword a few hours but never became one in his 6 years?? There’s other novels with the same storyline with much better pacing, I would move on past this one.

cover is Mori Calliope from Hololive EN good stuff good stuff good stuff good stuff good stuff good stuff good stuff good stuff good stuff

This book had a lot going for it to me in the beginning. I liked his slow decent into madness being stuck inside the dungeon, looking for enough power to get home. I didnt mind the system to much because you still needed to train powers and learn how to use them but all of a sudden it changes to cultivation and magic plus different worlds that are all getting mashed together and it’s not even recognized as the same story to me anymore. Dude gets out the dungeon after years and then a school arc happens and right after he is sitting atop a flying sword traveling through space. It’s still not horrible it just doesn’t give the same vibe anymore. Plus one second he wants a herem the next he is too scared ( emotional trauma ) to even hug the girl that’ s his woman. Not trying to hate though it’s kinda funny and if you like all the different power scales then it might be for you but it’s too all over the place for me.

As the first official reader of Crocs' book, I knew it could do well and I still think so. This story has some similarities with the books many are aware of, but not in any means, is same. Crocs has put his own uniqueness in the book and it shows in marvelous ways, and it always keep you on the edge of your seat. Go read, won't disappoint, cheers.

Personally I would say that this is a breath of fresh air in regards to the system genre. Usually novels that follow a story including a system, such as this one, are lackluster and come off as bland, this is a reoccurring trait within the system genre. However this story takes on many existing ideas and make them something entirely new and amazing. Another good point in regards to this novel is the writing. The majority of the books I've come across display some terrible writing, however this problem isn't at all evident in this novel. The writing quality is immaculate and the story flows exceptionally well. While I can't yet speak on the update schedule or the development of the story, I can say without a doubt that this story is heading on a path towards greatness and I want to be along for the ride.

initially ii as hyped bcs void and solo level like theme.. now it's completely rubbish .... i tried hard to read till 200 and so much disappointment that I don't want to even give another chance ... character development is trash, power leveling is stupid and author don't even show mc's progression .. first 50 chapters mc had some maturity now he is silly stupid crazy head. after moving to cloud plain he forgot entirely about his girlfriends and his mom or anything .. he completely focused on he senior sister and some stupid excuse of not able to progress and he challenge all over anyone how he sees fit. anyway it's a waste of time...

the first so many chapters are basically a retelling of arifureta. Elana is kaori both ate healers that love the mc. he gets stuck in a dungeon after being betrayed. First monster he hunts is a rabbit that ends up being way stronger than him. Then gets a lightning power from a wolf. Falls into a deep abyss, mutates with longer silver ish hair. like come on?? how obvious can you be just say there are heavy inspirations in the book description area.

Great concept and strong start, however i cannot get past the terrible dialogue. The main character really said "Wow! you werent kidding about your cooking skills. This is wifey-level skill right here for sure! Someone needs to wife you up ASAP!" Like bro nobody talks like that. I'm convinced the Author's an incel thats never talked to a woman before cuz theres just no way. Its just one of the examples but thats the one that made me stop i just couldnt push thru anymore.

A good try at writing a novel but don't expect anything great. Powerups without rhyme or reason, stupid story development and just plain bad world background. This could have been so so much more as the part on earth sets things up nicely but then everything collapses. The only other good thing is the writing quality. If the content of the story would be more refined and properly paced, the writing quality would be perfect. Unfortunatly, good writing can not realy save a bad story in my books. Still, I thank you author for trying to write :) Who knows, maybe you will get better and better with time?