Reborn in Jujutsu Kaisen as a Zenin
Life...
What is the perfect life people strive towards?
So many speak of seeking happiness, but what is happiness and what sources it?
Pleasure brings happiness.
No, eternal pleasure is true happiness.
The pleasure that one has from connecting with ones loved ones.
The pleasure from eating delicious food.
The pleasure from sex.
The pleasure from having sons or daughters whom make you proud, bring you joy.
The pleasure from certainity. From control.
I live again. Now in a world and clan where might in the end makes right.
I have become one who has might that rivals the Six Eyes and the Cleaver of Worlds.
I will thereby live a life fitting my stature.
I will do whatever pleases me.
Love who I please, elevate who I please and disgrace who I please.
And if one objects to my way of life, let their might speak in place of their worthless words, for in this world, power alone gives weight to conviction.
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(Author note: I know this Main Character sounds a lot like Sukuna - which is true, since the bastard inspired me writing this guy, quite a bit - but I personally intend to make him a superior version in philosophy.
Sukuna out of hatred and rage because of being rejected, sealed himself off and only dined on few of the pleasures of the world, food, control and most likely physical intercourse as well.
But this main character will have it all. He will love, he will feel connection, he will have control, etc.
Do understand though 2 things.
1) This is an AU, so not only japan has sorcerers.
2) Even though this is the modern world, such a thing matters not to the strong. If they wish to create their own empire, their own rules, they will.
So multiple wives is a thing, especially in the Zenin clan, since Naobito already has multiple.
BTW Main Character looks like Raoh from Hokuto no Ken, so he will be quite the giant, just not as big, since I don't wish to write a guy whose entire arm is a human's size.
Think, like 2 meters tall and muscular
So yeah, i hope you all enjoy it,
See ya!)
I am convinced this is written with AI. Little children talking like they are 40+ year adults. Drama/opera type talking, with way overcomplicated english.
It's fine, it's not the best, but it's fine. It's not fun and it's barely interesting, way too predictable. It's writing quality is good, no grammar mistakes and well structured. Perhaps a bit too dramatic or over the top, it definitely feels way too grandiose for what it is. Sometimes it gets too poetic and introspective, the MC and company keep talking about belief and going over the top every single conversation, but as I said, it's fine. Author does expand and makes an AU of the universe, which is good, adding other cultures and more sorcerers to the world. Probably one of the best JJK fanfics out there, the MC despite having the face of a character in the Fist of the North, with a body with bulging muscles is still charming.
I am leaving this review although it is too early to judge the story because it has literally just begun. But for now I sincerely like this story and I hope for a continuation.
started well copied and translated to a tee and then he started thinking he was an accomplished author and not a person who quit six different fanfics because he tried to incorporate romance and that's not the authors strong point.
It's a genuinely good JJK fanfic. 1. The MC's character is good, he is pragmatic and philosophical but is not emotionless. He is not some edgy Teenager with super powers or a sacrificial guy, he is a conqueror with a heart. 2. The MC's power is interesting and the development of power is well designed, not making him all-powerful and not making techniques out of his ass. 3. The other characters and their POVs are genuine enough that they are interesting. 4. The AU world's world-building and politics are thought out.
The best jujutsu kaisen fan fiction i have ever read. Lots of potential.
The writing is solid in this story, description is good, updates are consistent, world background is vividly dived into, and it is well-rounded. With that being said, I believe a bit more time could be invested into illustrating how the characters feel, their motives/thoughts, and laying out what they look/dress like. I welcome the author to look at my story Avatar: The Vindicated Avenger.
GOOD JOB I LOOK FORWARD FOR MORE.GOOD JOB I LOOK FORWARD FOR MORE.GOOD JOB I LOOK FORWARD FOR MOREGOOD JOB I LOOK FORWARD FOR MOREGOOD JOB I LOOK FORWARD FOR MORE
Lots of philosophical talk that I can't imagine a 15 year old TEENAGER saying these things. ---------------------------------------------------------
The only thing I didn't like about this FF is that GOJO keeps calling MC and SUKUNA his brother, like what? GOJO never said that in the original!
Pretty good the author has built up a compelling AU JJK universe. Looking forward to more. Looking forward to the continuation of the story.
the mc looks like raoh, that's enough to give this fic a five-stars
It's the first time I'm leaving a review. This book so far has been excellent, the pacing, the character development and world building are up there with the best. Please put out more chapters author-san. This one is now in my library at the very top.
This is really one of the top JJK I have ever seen. The story, the characters, the background, the interactions, the reasons are solid!! I am really looking for more chapters and quality content from you!
10/10 best novel Although I would have liked for the female characters to have used characters created from other franchises so you wouldn't have to complicate creating new ones or Ocs to have a clear image of them without having to resort to gpt chat. For example, as the mc's wife, you could have used some black-haired character from the anime like Haruno Yukinosita or Sagiri from hellparadice. They practically met the requirements of strong will and being able to be with mc. You just change her last name and check, but it doesn't matter. damn good original story just hope to see if there are more villains than crazy sukumbias