The Archetype Of Eternity
There are truths older than time itself. Laws that shape reality, unseen and unquestioned. But what if one man could defy them?
Adrian lived an ordinary life in the modern world—until the day it all unraveled. A primordial force, ancient beyond reckoning, awakens with newfound sentience. And in Adrian, it glimpses something no being—mortal or divine—has ever possessed: the potential to break the very fabric of existence.
Torn from the world he knew, Adrian is thrust into an unforgiving realm where power is the only law and destiny bends to the will of the strong. Yet, even as he struggles to survive, his journey is not just one of strength. Every battle, every revelation, and every loss carves a path toward something far greater.
This is not the story of a man seeking power. It is the story of a mind unraveling the very nature of reality. A soul reaching beyond fate itself. A force rewriting the universe.
The question is not whether Adrian will succeed.
The question is whether existence will survive his ascension.
Giving myself 4.5 stars because, while I believe the story has a lot of potential, there’s always room for improvement. The novel starts with trials that may feel slow, but they are important for setting up the grand journey ahead. Looking forward to your thoughts!”
Well the tone is quite good. My suggestion would be to maintain the consistency of words for each chapter because some chapters seems to long, some although not short, it feels short compared to the long ones
The novel is quite good atleast for the starting part,don't know how it will be in the future, my advice is you should stop showing so much about powerful stuff like the laws and universe because, when in the story you show ordinary things it might get boring
Still early in the story,but it's of to a promising start.The world-building is well thought out.Not a lot has happened but it is good. Hoping for new chaoters
There aren't many chapters yet, but the story has a solid start. The cultivation system send unique. The paving is a bit slow, but it looks like it's building towards something interesting
It is a good novel with a lot of potential but it has very little conversation with people,so please hurry up with new chapters and add more conversations