How To Subdue a Masochist Princess

While the story is good with nice characters, the quality of the translation has more than a few mistakes. The gender and used pronouns of the characters are often switchet. It goes to the point of also changing titels to match the mistakes, Lord=>Layde . I would also recommend to the author, not to translate the military ranks word for word, but use equivalents from other systems. For example, "of a hundred men" would better be translatet with " centurio" . I would also recomend, to mark the points where the character view changes, with eather a line, and/or with the nam of the charater. It would make the Story much clearer to read. All in all a nice piece of work.