Travelling through worlds to heal hearts
Author: Ruby_dreamer
(not enough ratings)
Overview
Table of Contents
Synopsis
A journey about a boy ,Joey who just turned adult with his mysterious system to healing the tragic characters who got nothing except bad things, being used as a stepping stone for heaven's darlings.Let's see whether Joey will heal those broken characters or wether he will uncover what the system is hiding from him.Will it indenger him?
You May Also Like
4 Reviews
(not enough ratings)
Translation Quality
Stability of Updates
Story Development
Character Design
World Background
Share your thoughts with others
Liked
newest
Decent English, it is easy to understand and honestly it's a good story just by the first chapter. I hope to see more!
hey ,I should be first fan of my own novel🤣
You are off to a good start. Make sure your paragraphs don't repeat. Other than that the story has a good flow and the characters are relatable. Looking forward to seeing more!
I love your story😁 I've only read the first 4 chapters so far, and it's really nice. One suggestion I have is for you to re check the other parts, as some of them seem to be rewritten.🙃