I Am Tired Of Being A Hero
“Have you ever wished that a truck would hit you and you would transmigrate into a world filled with swords and magic? Perhaps you wished that you would be a hero, defeating the villains, protecting the land, and receiving all sorts of admiration and love from the people. I would give you one piece of advice. Perish that thought.” -Ravi West
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Ravi West was a hero of indisputable esteem. As a Sentinel, he traveled the Realms, killing villains and saving entire civilizations. His job was everything to him. Until Luxor.
Luxor changed everything. Luxor changed him. Ravi was done. The tiredness etched into his bones. He laid down his mantle and vanished.
He chose the most boring planet in his memory for his retirement, except this Earth was not like the one he remembered- Nests, monsters, superheroes, and villains filled the streets but that was not his business. He has a plan, a quiet, uncaring life filled with wine, food, and books.
But the New Captain at the Bureau seemed to enjoy shattering all his carefully laid plans. He was the most annoying person Ravi had ever met, blonde hair, the most beautiful blue eyes, and a sunny smile, the righteous Arlen Sinclair constantly got involved in cases much bigger than him, dragging Ravi along into his Shenanigans.
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Grumpy, Cynic Shou who doesn't care if the world burns× Golden Retriever, Righteous Gong who is the first to bring the bucket to save the burning world.
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[This book is participating in the WSA contest]
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9 Chapters in and there's some good potential here. Characterization is strong and the situation unfolds understandably well and within a logical set of goals. Actions can be a bit confusing at times but nothing a solid editing session won't fix. Writing quality is the biggest detractor for me, and can use a good editing pass for clarity and polish. There was a lot of emphasis on Show but too little Tell for me to entirely understand what the situation of the world was. That said, it's also pretty early into the plot so establishing the characters is clearly where the author is at as of this review. Keep up the good work!
I really like this story, the metaphors are very interesting and fit the plot perfectly! The rhythm of the story is also very suitable, and the story is very strong! I highly recommend everyone to read this story, and I’m very much looking forward to the rest of the story! The background of the story is also very detailed, like creating a new world.
This is a really good story. It started out a little shaky so it took a second for me to get into it, but once I did I couldn’t stop. It kind of gives me tv show vibes and I love it. This book has found family, romance, action, powers, and a crazy background that’s very well thought out. The plot is keeping me here and I don’t think I’m going anywhere. It’s just too good and too many mysteries and turns and twists. I feel like I’m not describing this well but I would say give this book a shot if your considering it you won’t regret it!
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overall a wonderful story. I cant wait for more.
I enjoyed this fun little read. The character dynamics as well as the world is very entertaining to witness. Give it a read, it’s worth it. Keep it up author!