In DC/Young Justice with the Omnitrix/Ultimatrix and a Chat Group
So, apparently I'm Albedo now...
And to make things worse, I'm in the DC universe, which one exactly, I've got no fucking clue.
Fuck man! Why do I have to be in the body of a inverted person! Do you know how attention drawing white hair and red eyes look like in the real world?! It's been like what, the 4th person who asked me if they were natural?!
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I gotta dye this shit black, like my original hair was...
(Author note: This fanfic is an AU of my other fanfic, where instead of Samael being in Marvel he is in DC/Young Justice.
The world is a mix of the animated series and the comics - to give myself both a blueprint to work with and enough leeway, since I plan to make the characters have more of their comic capabilities.
Also, It also has a chat group element, currently having Aizen, Light, and Azula in it as well as Samael.
I hope you all enjoy it, see ya!)
Let him meet with Marvel Samael(MS), like what happened to MS where he's trap in the Null Void Or let the Chat group give a Mission where they have to go Marvel Universe(without MS) and DC Samael meeting with the folks there
It’s good content also I’m a sucker for the omnitrix as a power set just because I was and stilll am a Ben 10 die hard fan anyway I always wanted to see what kind of crazy stuff an omnitrix wielder could do in settings with more aliens to sample like imagine the levels of espionage and diplomacy you could pull off in Star Wars or Star Trek where they have many alien species. Anyway dc is a good option in that regard especially out in space as an example mogo the litteral sentient planet.
Story is good but why are you complicating every single conversation between characters , conversation Between intelligent people doesn't mean every single one of their conversation is made up of complicated terms.He is also very much limiting himself by joining Bruce and company and there have been no visible benefit from them till now.
I don't even need to read more chapters cuz this is the same guy who made: As The Kyuubi no Yoko in Naruto, Reborn in Jujutsu Kaisen as a Zenin, In the MCU/Marvel with the Omnitrix/Ultimatrix and As the Hulk in Danny Phantom/DC/Young Justice so I know this is gonna be peak I beg you author don't drop this I haven't read a good DC story in a long ass time so please bless webnovel with a good fic
Fantastic story thus far takes the premise from his previous story much further and is much more comprehensive in exploring the multifaceted nature of human beings. If you like, thought provoking yet interesting stories this one’s for you.
Honestly cinema af, perfectly accurate to the Ben 10 lore and to my knowledge only one minor thing wrong in DC lore which is unimportant as it's merely a minor background character error. If you love Ben 10 and DC you'll love this Fanfic👌
nice 👍 i like the approach and asthetic on the writing don't be hard on yourself your doing great.
Not only is this a fanfic about the Ultimatrix in the DCU but this is made by the same guy who made all those other hidden gems. Enough said, it's simply a must read. diamond in the rough indeed.
Way better than the mcu version, mostly because that one was willing to share the mc secrets too fast, and was scared of absolute power. here not soo much, he is growing and will rise up, still annoyed the ultimatrix is locked from scanning new aliens
good so far I need more chapter to make a decision about this novel
i read author fanfic about ultimatrix in marvel and i think this story have big potential i wait new chapter this story NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE
Dude, once again, you made me save a story. As a huge fan of Ben 10, I don't see a lot of good story's with the ultimatrix, so I'm glad to see it. Keep up the amazing work!
A great novel. The first few chapters were slow but the story has a good flow of slow and fast pacing. I really hope this book goes on for a while since it’s rare to see a decently done omnitrix fanfic.
La verdad, no se me ocurre otra palabra para describir esta historia que espectacular, el resto son los caracteres que tengo que llenar para publicar el comentario,
Better than MCU counterpart, The main character doesn’t spam aliens like the previous one did. I love most of the first 10 aliens in the roster. I don’t like how complicated each conversation is. it’s fine if it happens from time to time, but it should be balance better with normal dialogue.