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Okay, I just finished going through the chapters, and I’ve got to say. I’m really intrigued. There’s something about the way the story mixes normal school life with this weird, almost eerie atmosphere that kept me reading. The characters, especially Kama and his brother Ariz, feel super real. Their back-and-forth was funny at times, but also kind of emotional in a quiet way. You can tell there’s history between them, and that made me care about them more than I expected. But I gotta be honest... the chapters are long. Like, really long. I caught myself scrolling and scrolling, wondering when a scene would end. Don’t get me wrong, the writing is detailed and flows well, but I think it would help a lot if the chapters were broken into smaller parts. Not because the content is bad but because it’s a lot to take in all at once. Shorter chapters would make the pacing feel tighter and give each scene more punch. Also, there are some moments where things get a bit repetitive—like a character’s thoughts or reactions looping in similar ways—but that’s nothing a bit of trimming wouldn’t fix. Overall, though, I’m hooked. The slow reveal of the school’s weird vibe, the strange behavior of the teachers, and how Kama is just trying to stay low-key while getting pulled into something bigger? I’m totally here for it. Just… maybe give us a breather between the scenes next time 😅

MC is a chatterbox 🤣🤣🤣.. He asked questions so much I felt like smacking his face. But then... I love the author ability to have created an excellent world building and setting that blends well with the characters in the story. Great job, author.

This is a fine piece of art, I'm Interested in the mysterious nature of everything especially the school system and the detective kinda students .😋. Keep going .. don't stop

Nice Story interesting Start and a 5 year void I've not successfully Read all chapters yet but I think 5 chapters is enough for me to appreciate the writers work Nice Story Plot Thumbs up to the writer ☺️

I love how the author was able to combine school life and mystery together and was still able to keep the readers hooked. nice one[img=update][img=update][img=update]

I always love detective stories. I started reading novel by reading Hardy Boys and 3 Detective Series during my school days! Brought back my memories! Hope to read more! Gonna have fun reading!

The story has a really good start🔥, it straight up gave the reader’s curiosity about missing for five years😅 when I thought that it was just gonna be a normal school genre thing haha. And kinda curious about his friends too so yeh imma keep reading hehe😌

I haven't read school or student base novel in so long, the first chapter overwhelmed me by the long chapter haha, my fault. anyways I liked it the plot is solid alright! lets read more!

okay so story plot is good although i won't read most of school life stories but this one interesting so I'll keep going

been reading until chp 5 and it's hook me more to read! the mystery plot is also well done!🔥📢 keep it up author !

This is one intriguing novel woven out by the author. Can't wait to see how it progresses

I really like the story Start up it's really interesting

A pretty interesting read, nice plot and the characters was good. I highly recommend it!

I am impressed by the author's work so far. It is very much engaging. Keep it up. Looking forward to more chapters in the future 🫶🫶🫶🫶🫶🫶🫶🫶🫶🫶