Great story so far. I wonder how he will be able to handle Johan death when he is 15 or 16 years old, and I also wonder how he will honor his parents
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Lilitha_Siko
great book I hope the author doesn't abandon the book
a month ago
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TyrantQ
History is Magnificent .................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
a month ago
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Dardar6212
I have been waiting for a novel like this
a month ago
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Imposter_OG
I'm giving 1 star in character design because he literally broke his streak and promise to his grandfather because Maria literally pressured him to do so. keep in mind that this same guy is the one who said "once you break it once it's easier to break again"
it just broke the immersion and the character image I had in mind
a month ago
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Dinch_Ceballos
Its a good story maybe dont make him too op but overall its better than half of the storys i have read
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Great story so far. I wonder how he will be able to handle Johan death when he is 15 or 16 years old, and I also wonder how he will honor his parents
great book I hope the author doesn't abandon the book
History is Magnificent .................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I have been waiting for a novel like this
I'm giving 1 star in character design because he literally broke his streak and promise to his grandfather because Maria literally pressured him to do so. keep in mind that this same guy is the one who said "once you break it once it's easier to break again" it just broke the immersion and the character image I had in mind
Its a good story maybe dont make him too op but overall its better than half of the storys i have read Next few words to make 140 Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa