Pitch Perfect: The Awakening System
*Awakening Is The Dawn Of A New Eternity. in the depths of my own consciousness, I have discovered the keys to unlock the mysteries of the cosmos.*
Elian, a young and talented but struggling soccer player discovers a mysterious system that appears in his mind, claiming to be the "Awakening System." The system offers to help Elian become the greatest soccer player of all time, but at a cost. A terrifying one. As Elian uses the system's powers, he must navigate the consequences of relying on its abilities and the true cost of his success.
System Core Abilities:
- "Skill Boost": Temporarily increases Elian's skills and abilities
- "Game Reading": Gives Elian real-time analysis and predictions of the game
- "Body Enhancement": Enhances Elian's physical abilities, allowing him to perform superhuman feats.
Level up to gain more abilities.
As Elian rises to fame and success, he must confront the darkness within himself and the true nature of the Awakening System trying to consume his humanity. Will he find a way to balance his ambition with his humanity, or will the darkness of the system consume him completely?
*it’s my very first system novel since I’m not a fan of systems. you should know before you start reading that the system is very realistic and the MC would struggle with it a lot. oh and, it contains a little sci-fi. just a tiny bit, it doesn’t affect the main story. There will be romance too, like, the MC would get a life besides football.
Author’s review here. It’s a five star for me. Personally I feel like it’s a wonderful concept and a different system from what we all know. The System in this novel is an AI which ended up developing feelings and self awareness outside of its programme, so it struggles to take over the MC. The MC has to struggle between his dreams and a system he had later come to regard as a friend. Really, try it. You’ll love it, I’m sure of that.
a very good story i have very high hopes about this novel. hopefully the author doesn't drop it later on since this is actually a very intriguing story
This is a very well put together story. It jumps right into the action and keeps its pace. It also hold perspective and concept very well. I do wish there was more detail, because I like getting a view of what's happening. But this takes nothing away from the great quality story we have here.