I am making changes to the story and hopefully improving it, here is a sneak peak of what to see after I finish editing, previous chapters.
Vol. 1 Chapter 11 - Uhtred's Past (1)
/As soon as Uhtred fell, into his slumbers, on the evening before the 'Y-T-E, on planet Bentheim. Uhtred entered a strange 'dream-like movie-theater, and as soon as Uhtred sat in a chair, facing the large projection-screen. Memories, almost as if flashbacks of his life, started to be 'projected onto the screen, in the theater that is currently playing Uhtred's past life. The first scene, starts when Uhtred was only 'fourteen-years age. Before he ever left for the 'Friday-Coalition, to study as a mech-pilot, because he was born with a more than 'excellent neural-aptitude…/
I am doing this, thanks to some helpful advice from friends on discord, I won't mention their names for privacy reasons ofcourse, but if you are reading this, know I appreciate all of you!